Raymond N Murray

Cairo, Georgia

Just a guy trying to write himself into existence.

Not following anyone yet

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Just the little things

Okay, it took me a moment to gather my thoughts. Your descriptions are easy to visualize. There a few grammatical errors, but nobody is perfect. The plot was easy to follow, nothing too overly complicated. I tried to find some holes, but none at the moment. And your character's dialogue seemed genuine, there is nothing worse than forced dialogue. And I think you handled it nicely.

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