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Okay! You've written only the opening chapter and trust me, it's a good start. I felt there were a few grammatical errors in some places. But that's a different thing. The thoughts in the story are creative.

As for the upcoming chapters, maybe the human-turned-cat can somehow try to get that wizard to help her. Just a thought. That's the first thing that came to my mind.

Or if you want to portray some kind of rivalry between the wizard and cat, you might have two subplots. One plot would be of the cat endeavoring to turn back into human form; another of the wizard and cat having kind of a Tom and Jerry run.

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