I was gripped on from the word go and finished it in one sitting.
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The story itself became a rollercoaster of the good, bad and everything in-between. The way she felt from time-to-time was wonderfully described. The chemistry between the characters was fantastic and that's what made it intriguing. I'm glad you finished it off with an aftermath of it too.
The only thing I wished for was to see a longer desire to have each other, the tension they had between them to go on just a tad bit longer. There was also, some parts I would of liked to of read, like the interview, or a meeting with the doctor or the times she spent with his daughter, like if she had an instinct (in an innocent way). I wanted to be in her shoes in "real-time".
Some little mistakes but, understandable.
Thank you for taking the time to write this, and for the world to see it.
All the best.