Rachiie-Writes

Bristol, United Kingdom

Hello, I'm Rachel. I am a Graphic Designer in Bristol. In my spare time I dance (like ballet and tap), design, painting, cross-stitch and writing.

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Really good

It’s a wonderful adventure,as myself, I’m a bit of a tomboy with a dancing background, so I understood about growing up and becoming a women in a unique way. I know the author did this in the NaNoWriMo challenge and credits to you for completing it with this story.

This is my first with the author, and I look forward to reading some more.

All the best

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Slow burn

If you're looking for a story that will pull your heartstrings, dramma and emotional roller-coaster, this is one is for you.

Light easy read, something to pick up to pass the time away in my luch breaks. Quite addictive, with a vast amounts of plot twists, they will always be a surprise.

Thank you writing this

All the best

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His Cupcake

It was a nice light read for me. The characters were good and good drama.

Thank you for writing this.

All the best.

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Good

The story overall has some potential.

Emotionally it was interesting, understanding someone who is building boundaries, and closing themselves off and it only takes one person to get them to come out of their shell, and knock their guard down without even trying. Which was why Brendon was my favourite character throughout it all.

Writing style was excellent which made it a light easy read.

Congrats on writing this story.

All the best.

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Great start

(read up to chapter 7)

A great dramatic start, knowing the main character's future and her optimism to make a change before it's too late. As you go through, you get a new revelation of who she is and why she is doing this.

The concept of the plot is interesting and different, and I believe there will be more to offer when the author uploads more.

Tip: when a new person speaks, make a new line, as this becomes a little bit confusing.

Can't wait for more.

All the best.

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A great read

Really great story. Lovely writing style, and interesting plot.

If you wonder what happens when a rapper falls in love with a trainee Vet, both with a deep secrets, then this is a story you want to read.

Great light read, the middle of the story went a bit too long for me, but then the ending had everything I was waiting and looking for.

Thank you for writing this and sharing this to the world.

I hope to see more from you in the future.

All the best

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Good stuff!

All good storyline, interesting perspective wandering with the main character, and question whether they will survive. There were some great action and emotional parts, and I got the gist on what the character was walking into.

I think with another look over, and changing those "show don't tell" scenarios, it'll be a good story.
But hey! we're all guilty doing so.

Thanks for writing this, and sharing it to the world.

All the best.

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The final....

Wow, the final one. I was expecting anything that I had read. It was great.
A great eye opener to mental health issues and other encounters that is hard to address sometimes.

I’m with everyone who has commented and reviewed... I need more. I don’t feel like this is another ending, but another beginning. I almost want the next one not only to be the last one, but an uplifting boost that no matter happens, love, faith, belief conquers all.

Thank you for writing this.

All the best

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Where the devil says goodnight

(Read up to Chapter 5)

This has a lot of potential, and I can see there is a great deal to come, and how they can make this work. The characters themselves both have something to offer, which will make you want to join on their journey, while they discover what they want from each other too.

Really great detailing, I wouldn't worry too much of the language you have inputted, as it will not put anyone off. It will give the story the concept of them being in Ireland, and the culture of it too.

Thank you for sharing this :)

All the best.

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Opening up

A way to learn and understand about someone’s mind you truly love is important. Because you’ll never know, until you talk.

That’s what I got when I read this story.

Heart-warning experience when going on their rollercoaster of a relationship. To finally see what he is how he became that is an eye opening for her and for the reader.

To the last one I go...

All the best

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Always alone

It’s great to pick up something that has a emotional dark complex.

Easy light read and an open ending will have to let me find out the answer to Devin and his problems.

Interesting concept and looking forward to read the rest.

All the best

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What a way to end

Thanks for making a sequel. That closure was worth it.

What a journey they went on and I’m glad I got to tag along with it. A love story that we all wished to have ah apply ending.

Congrats on writing your story and sharing it with the world.

All the best

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Thank god there’s a sequel 😂

The overall story was really well thought out and it made it more interesting because anyone who was reading it, was waiting for that moment to come when Ryan and Izabele got together and now they made it work. The ending was a bit of a shock and I’m glad the author adding in the epilogues as a sort of closure.

That ending, was too realistic, and I’m glad to hear there is a sequel. I’m a sucker for a happy ending.

Can’t wait to read the next one.

All the best

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A love story, that you will need to read.

Different twist to the Romeo and Juliet experience. Very much enjoyed it and read it in one sitting.

I like the spark and the romance blossoming between them and great knowledge on medical side.

If you are looking for something that will pull you into an emotional roller coaster and land into a pool of emotions that you will find hard to control. Then this is a story for you.

Couple of errors, but no biggie. Recommend just looking back and changing them.

Thank you for writing this.

All the best.

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Interesting

Really interesting, really liked going on the journey with Nico and facing his fears along the way. The support from Ryan and others were nice and the fact he could find someone to understand him as he is.

Little bit of confusion with dialogue but got the gist of it. Some gramma errors but it’s a nice story.

All the best

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All good

Enjoyed reading this. All good plot, quite a dark and dramatic ending, but it was exciting to see their relationship blooming.

All the best

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Caught between the decision!

Congrats on writing your story. I very much enjoyed it and I could see the potential of it. The tension and mixed emotions between the characters worked well and is almost quite relatable. I became very divided who Becca should really have chosen but I predicted how it would end and that didn't bother me. It almost come to a point that Logan got in the way and bothered me frantically.

With Becca, I felt discouraged on some of her actions, and whether she wanted to take more risks but it was done in the wrong manner. There were some parts I understood why she did it, but sometimes I fear it was too irresponsible.

Well done in all for writing a really good story. Thank you for sharing it to the world.

All the best

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Gripping

I was gripped on from the word go and finished it in one sitting.

The story itself became a rollercoaster of the good, bad and everything in-between. The way she felt from time-to-time was wonderfully described. The chemistry between the characters was fantastic and that's what made it intriguing. I'm glad you finished it off with an aftermath of it too.

The only thing I wished for was to see a longer desire to have each other, the tension they had between them to go on just a tad bit longer. There was also, some parts I would of liked to of read, like the interview, or a meeting with the doctor or the times she spent with his daughter, like if she had an instinct (in an innocent way). I wanted to be in her shoes in "real-time".

Some little mistakes but, understandable.

Thank you for taking the time to write this, and for the world to see it.

All the best.

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Really Good

The overall outtake of the story was very well thought of, it all came together really well and it worked beautifully.

Your description of how the characters felt really got my attention and I couldn't put the book down once I started. I was gripped, it almost got to a point that I thought they would live happily ever after, but something always got in the way and that's what made it much more interesting.

The only thing that I have to say is that the POV points could be a bit more clearer, maybe it would of been better if the POV was each chapter? Ok, it may have made your chapters shorter, but I don't think it'll be a problem. I've seen from other reviews/comments that the child acted a bit more older than the age she was stated and I agree with that. I don't think it would of mattered if they met again 4 or 5 years later after she was born, it wouldn't change the story too much. A couple of grammar mistakes but easy to understand what you were implying.

Thank you for creating this and wish you all the best.

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Thank you for taking the time to write this

It must of taken you a long time and I credit you for it, putting all the hard work into this story is amazing. I thought picking up this book, it's going to be the "bad boy good girl, pretend relationship than falling in love" scenario. However, it was more than that, the plot, in general, had much more to offer with all the characters. I think what was nice that the main POV character had a deep secret too and that made it much more interesting.

That extra touch you implemented, really make this become a fantastic story.

The way the characters interacted with each other and the humour you included created a great impact.

Because of how long the story is, I had to dip in and out of it a few times, but I fell back into it really easy. The only thing I could say is, a few grammar mistakes but I completely understand what you meant, I believe some parts didn't need dialogue and just as descriptive sentences. Also, there are some parts where it got a bit too descriptive. What I mean by that is, me (as a reader) understood the situation and for it to be heavily described in detail wasn't necessary, my imagination was prepared for it.

I credit to you for the time and effort for writing this, I hope you continue in what you are doing and look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

All the best.

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What a ending

Finished in one sitting again, was very gripped.

Enjoyed the connection between the characters and got to know more of the others too.

A clever intake overall from the trilogy.

Thank you for writing them

All the best.

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Nice follow up

Straight to the next one and finished it on one sitting.

A little bit short, but all the action points were there, and they made up for it. Again the connection between the characters was great. The built-up worked and kept me gripped to it.

Can't wait to read the third one.

All the best

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1 down, 2 to go....

The story its self is gripping, and it was an easy read and flowed well. The characters, in general, worked well together, and their feeling towards each other felt very real.

It almost made me forget sometimes that he didn't really 'exist' in the living.
What made this enjoyable is the complication between makes this story very unique.

The descriptions overall and the background story from each character played well in this.

Also, quite the cliffhanger you've left it too....well played.

I've started it and I might as well finish it.

Looking forward to reading the rest.

All the best.

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