Raigon

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Great

I love this, I think though the birthday part could have been left off. It was a good overall story until you got to that part, inwhich, it didn't really add any substances and took away from how they managed to get their brother home, Splinter's reaction to their disappearances, and a lot of stuff that would have fleshed out the story better than the cut to the birthday piece.

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