Raxhil. A

“If there is a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, you must be the one to write it” Toni Morrison

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Mad!!❤️❤️

Okay, so I really like your book because the writing style is lovely, and the plot demonstrates how good it is. However, I think you should try breaking up the paragraphs a little more in chapter one. Overall, this is a charming and lovely novel; keep up the good work.

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Love it

To be completely honest, I don't usually read werewolf books, but I decided to give yours a shot and I'm glad I did. The only issue is that your paragraphs are far too long, which causes a lot of confusion and makes it difficult for me to read.

The book's plot is fantastic, and your grammar and punctuation are flawless.

To make a long story short, your book is unique and amazing, and you are a gifted writer.

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Beautiful!!!!!!

Okay, I like how you made it perfectly clear that Mimi is different, and I'm not sure why she talks to herself so often, but it lets us know what's going on in her head.

Stefan and Jasper are intriguing, and I'm curious as to where this will lead. You've also kept me on my toes, as I'm curious as to what will happen next.

Your grammar and punctuation are lovely, and I think the author did an excellent job in general!!!

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Loved it!!😘

I love dark romance and werewolf books, particularly dark romance.

I never expected *THE DOMINATION GAME* to be so good.

Dark books always has suspense to make the reader curious about the next chapter, your book has suspense and that makes it perfect for a dark book 👍🏽

Your writing skills are so beautiful and unique, your writing makes me understand what’s going on in the book......it’s not complex like some writer 👍🏽

The plots are nice and slow.....it’s not rushed and scrambled.👍🏽

The conversation is realistic and the characters don’t have robotic dialogues.👍🏽

in a summary, you are a gifted novelist, and you should continue writing because your books are incredible.....GOOD JOB!!!👍🏽

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Lovely

The plot of the book is just beautifully written, the conversation was realistic and the characters did not a robotic conversations.

Anthony and mark's bond is so strong I can feel it through my screen. They have different personalities even though they are twins, and that makes it more sensible.

Your writing style is amazing, your grammar and punctuation are incredible.

Overall you are a talented writer and you should keep up the good work 👍🏽

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Interesting

To be honest, I don’t read werewolves books, hell, I didn't even know what omega and beta were, but I did some research, and I was able to understand the novel better, your writing skills are beautiful, the plot is very wonderful because not all writers have a nice and easy plot *including myself* and you make your readers curious about what’s gonna happen next, and is the best way to keep your readers interested and excited. Overall you are a talented writer. Good job👍🏾

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Outstanding

Your novel is incredible *no cap*and the thing I loved most about the book is that Nick isn’t a stuck up arrogant like in most novel where the billionaire is a rich cocky arrogant and that makes it unique from most billionaires novels 👏🏾👏🏾

Your writing skills are amazing because when I read through some reviews there were problems with your punctuations and capitalization’s and you fixed them, you were able to learn better from your mistakes and that’s amazing 👏🏾👏🏾

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Can’t wait for more

The fact you wrote another language makes me wanna read more and your writing skill are just the definition of amazing I hope you upload more chapters because your fans are itching to know what's gonna happen next

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