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Oh, wow. Really, really, wow. Again; I'm impressed with the way you tell a story through flashbacks; all the while telling the present story to; interweaving them masterfully.
Bull losing himself was absolutely terrifying; and I'll admit usually I'd be annoyed at him praying, but for this story I think it worked. And that last chapter? Damn, man, damn.
Well, this was sad through out; but a kind of...bearable sad? Real, raw grief that connected me to the story, that is.
I loved seeing how they slowly came together as a couple in the flashbacks; then seeing the 'present' where Dorian is just hurting so much and not coping well at all. Ow, just ow.
I've never read of an Adaar who had a crush on Solas before, but I can really see it happening.
That ending, while sad, was wonderful. Just the right kind of thing for this story.
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