RenkonNairu

Los Angeles

If some of my stories sound familiar, that is because I also have accounts on FanFiction.Net and AO3. Same penname as here, RenkonNairu. Look me up some time!

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Love the idea, not a fan of 1st person

I love Zutara and so was very pleased to find a Zutara ship here on Inkitt. I liked this first chapter and will definitely continue reading. My one complaint isn't with the story itself but rather the narrative. I'm not a big fan of first person narrative. I might be alone in this, but I feel it makes characters sound self-centered because everything is always "I saw", "I thought", "I did". Its a spam of I, Me, My and it just irritates me. But not enough to prevent me from enjoying your story.

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Yay! Zatanna Attention!

This was a lovely character study. I find that Zatanna didn't really get a lot of attention from the fandom compared to other characters and its nice to see her as a central character in a fic.

The pacing in this story seemed a little off to me, though. I feel like things moved just a little two quickly between her and Artemis. Maybe low it down a bit and break this into two chapters instead of a oneshot? Everything else was great.

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