Revolution1407

Kyiv, Ukraine

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I like the idea of the story only I think that it is not presented completely. The moral of this story is very good and it is clear that the authour has a talant. Only I concider that the writer should perfect his/her skills. The short story is quite instructive but there is still something to work towards. But all the same, nice work!

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