Revolution1407

Kyiv, Ukraine

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It has a message

I like the idea of the story only I think that it is not presented completely. The moral of this story is very good and it is clear that the authour has a talant. Only I concider that the writer should perfect his/her skills. The short story is quite instructive but there is still something to work towards. But all the same, nice work!

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Very interesting

It is clear that it is only the start of the story but even after reading it I surely can tell that it is a very interesting. The first-person narrative not revealing the thoughts and actions of other characters makes real suspense. Plus this romance story is also written well. This book is quite exciting. The only thing, in real life such men as Mr Williams are good to lose your head about but not to live with.. After all, some his deeds manifest him as a real despot.

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Interesting

Though I am not a fan of fantasy, I should admit that this story has very interesting plot. It creates great suspense which with time only grows. Maybe, as for my taste, there are too much of gothic elements but I think that's all right with other people. There were some inaccuracy in spelling but it did not spoil the whole impression. I like some characters too. The girl got my sympathy although I should confess that sometimes I really pitied Lord Stefan. Hovewer it's better to do without spoilers. I wish the auther all the best and to finish this story soon.

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