Richard Khumalo

Neat

A mixture of crime and magic wow i have been looking for such a book for a long time ,I like it.Keep up the good work

Dialogue

Your book is very interesting and this is a good beginning i have got to say. Why not try to seperate the dialogues for example

“Dad is mom going to be okay?” Charles said staring at his father who was crying

“She will be fine my boy everything will be alright” replied his father assuring him

It makes it easier for the reader to keep up with the dialogue you feel me. I am living your book so far. The prologue needs some corrections it terms of gramma it has got some errors but i love it because it captures the attention of the reader and makes him/her want to read more.

Lovely

Try the story im sure youd love it very much because i being its writer definitely adore it.

Awesome stuff, self love.

Its really a good story. Starttibg it from book one is the best. Tom & Theresa such great characters indeed.

Perfection

I really like the way you take your time to describe actions and surroundings without word dumping. Each paragraphs makes me want to keep reading....in my opinion your book is a page turner. Even though im a very lazy reader my mind is forbidding me from skipping any lines because i want to be part of every moment. Seeing the amount of effort you put in your books just motivates me to work harder. Your writings are master pieces✌🏾

Inetresting

The story is very unique i am a fan of werewolves so i know a lot about them but ive never come across something like this so i believe its original. I really love where the story is going and it shows a lot of potential to become something big. The story is very good However you must revisit your chapters and correct the grammar. Have you tried using grammarly try it. I love it❤️❤️❤️❤️

I love it 💯%

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Impressed

I am not a fan of adult novels but i have got to say i am very impressed. I have enjoyed reading this book to the extent that i am beginning to love adult novels keep up the hood work i love your writing OMG i wish i could use a voice note to express my satisfaction

neat

I am loving your way of writing wow,its just out of this world

Neat work

i'm not a very good writer but when i see great work i know it and this is neat work.I like your way of writing