RosamundJenesa

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Looks Promising!

Excellent story with humor, action, mystery and crime. This plot has got some potential classic spy vibe. Ms. Hussain is my favorite character here. I find her more attractive because of her sense of humor and seriousness. Author's writing style is also pretty good with a few grammatical mistakes in there, but they were not enough to keep me away read this awesome novel. However, polishing makes things even better. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

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Overwhelming Emotions

Author has a brilliant idea of how to bring out emotion throughout the whole story and blend them perfectly with the plot, really admirable. I have high hopes for your novel. I loved it at first glance when I read the title and blurb. I'm glad it didn't disappoint me from the side of the story plot. However, there were some mistakes I've found there in the story which distracted me a bit. But everything is fixable with few clicks and edits. I wish you ​good luck in the competition!!

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Queen Aravena

This woman you have is truly something. Bold personality, the hard exterior with a glimpse of a soft heart. I love Aravena already. Please do write more. I want to see more of Aravena and Nathaniel.

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The Queen that Time Forgot

Such an incredible story with a great plotline. Loved the whole settings of the story from writing style to the plot development. Just amazing. Though increasing the plotline would be great, but I liked your ending here either way. Keep up the writing :)

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