The Victorious Competitors
Hi there! And before you get offended, just wanted to let you now I am really sorry for being rude. It's just that I don't really tell many authors that their work have potential and I can really see it in your writing style. I can see how you can just reach a place with no bounds to your writing skills and how much of a chaos it can create with your talents.
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I think the previous works' of yours that I read were simply amazing but this one can be better than what you did. To start with: (I did some analysis that can help your book become better and will make it as short as I can.)
Readers can be really tricky to understand sometimes and trust me that I know it. They tell you that there are some errors in your work but won''t clearly specify what you can improve. I don't want to be like that so I will be really frank with you.
1. As soon as I read your first chapter, for people like me who like cricket but don't really know the specific details and the depth, it can be quite confusing, though something with a lot of significance. Therefore, you can add it after chapter 1 or in chapter 1 with the introduction of the main character.
2. The initial chapter where you explained about cricket and all was quite boring for me cause I didn't really have to go into such depths I think. So, maybe you can cut it short and add things about how becoming a cricketer and also being one isn't really easy and add how there are many difficulties and expectations of the country that you don't wanna disappoint and all.
3. The chapters then were amazing but I think that your book has the potential to be made into a movie as there isn't really one on Virat Kohli, so I had prefer you to add some interesting elements which I think you can surely figure out.
And last but not the least, you can end some chapters in a bit of suspense to keep the readers intrigued.
I know that it might not be possible for you to make all these changes as your book is already complete but if you want you can do it and don't doubt your talent just because of a petty review of mine.
You have a lot of potential and I hope people can see it in your work so
Keep fighting!!! ^_^