Pulls you in from the start
I love it when books jump straight into the story and you were able to wonderfully do that. It's a very well-written story that immediately pulls you in. You are introduced to a strong MC who is both rational and emotional, making her son one of her weaknesses (and assuming her only one). In her tough how will she decide rationally or emotionally? This causes some complexity in the character, and the reader can't anticipate what she will do next. With that being said it makes us readers want to read about her even more. I want to know more about her!
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This book has very long chapters ranging from 2,000 to 3,000 words per chapter, which is a lot and sometimes hard to follow, but it's necessary for this story because it helps the reader grasp the setting.
This is a very impressive story, that is descriptive and smoothly written. There are only three chapters posted and as much as I would wish you would post more, I also appreciate you taking the time to thoroughly write this story! I can't wait to see what you do with it!