Ruby D. Carter

Hello, I am Ruby Carter. I write historical fiction stories. I hope you all enjoy! :)

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Really good

I really like the stile of the story, you can understand the character very well, which is good. I think the plot is interesting and does want to make you keep on reading. Overall a really good story.

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Really good

I've said before that teen romance books are not my thing, but this one was by far the best I've read. It was a bit wordy but it helped you get a nice picture of the world around, so I don't know what you should do. Only minor mistakes. For one I noticed that you called Melissa "Hannah" in what I think was chapter three. Also I honestly did not understand what happened in the end. Maybe be less figurative so it's more obvious. But other than that it was really good.

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Needs work, but good

I hope you don't find this review to be rude. It does need work primarily in punctuation. When writing a conversation every time a new character speaks there should be a new paragraph. Also not all your sentences had capitalization, which is a must. And there was one point in the first chapter where you call Olive 'Olivia' which is odd. Now this story really isn't my thing, but it is good. I like the twist at the end of the third chapter, it does make you wonder what happens next. So it's not a bad plot, just needs to be cleaned up. It does have some high school romance cliches but maybe those can be worked out. Overall it's not a bad story though and I do like the plot.

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Good start

Writing reviews for poetry is hard as there is not much plot and can be more subjective, I think that this is really nice. The second poem is my personal favorite. But still I like these and I think you have a talent for creating these.

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Compelling

Romance novels can always be a bit odd and not very good, but this one has a great start. I like how it isn't like 'she saw him and now their instantly in love'. I am excited to find out what the characters are going to do next because there is a good amount of suspense. I think to make it better you could maybe make a passing comment or something as to why Hazel hates Cyrus so much. But other than that it is a really good start.

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Interesting

This is not the type of story I would normally read, but I did enjoy it. The plot is unique and interesting. It does make you wonder what is going to happen next. Some things seem cliched, but maybe that is just me. Things sometimes seem a bit odd, like that the sheriff would show a teenager pictures of his murdered girlfriend. I will admit that I am a bit ignorant to the rules of punctuation but I do know that you use commas where they shouldn't be. But really, a good story that I would consider reading more of.

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