RubyonWings

Selangor, Malaysia.

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Finished it in a day!

For starters, the concept of Hleo is new and a breath of fresh air. Descriptions and adjectives well thought-out, bringing out the background and setup of the entire story very beautifully. Loved the character development, especially on Ethan. I feel like I'm reading a professional edited and published book, very well polished and the flow to it is exceptional!

I was hoping that the main character would stand out more compared to a normal high-school girl (personality-wise), but that's my personal taste! A little on the down side is that the plot's overall up's and down's can be quite easily predicted, and slightly cliche. Some parts dragged on a bit too much for my tastes, as I prefer plots that go straight to the point. But overall, great book!

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