Freethoughtsss🦄

@Ryleeh06Delhi

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Worse work I've ever read

"I've encountered many disappointments in my life, but nothing quite compares to the utter disaster that is this so-called novel. Calling it 'bad' would be an insult to the word. It's an incomprehensible mess of disjointed thoughts, written in the most atrocious English imaginable. The characters? Flat as cardboard cutouts. The dialogue? A painful exercise in endurance. And don't even get me started on the storyline—oh wait, there *isn't* one! It's like the author threw random words together and hoped they'd somehow form a coherent narrative. The most baffling part? Some people actually claim to enjoy this monstrosity! I can only assume they're either masochists or reading a completely different book because there's absolutely nothing of value here. It's a masterclass in how *not* to write—disturbing content, nonexistent character development, zero exposition, and plot holes you could drive a truck through. This isn't just a bad novel; it's a crime against literature."

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A worth read

I wouldn't say I like your writing style and skills. In the entire novel, the errors and poor writting kinda pissed me but the story line, characters and all the motivating lines you've wrote here makes it, "Don't put it down, keep reading" work. I finished this within an hour, of course! It was a short novel😅 Anyway, you may need alot of practice to become a good writer but your imagination girl... It's beautiful. I'd love to give your all books a shot! Keep going because you're amazing!! One day, you will definitely become one of the best authors!❤️❤️

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Amazing!!

You know? My room is full of novels in which I have no idea how many are yet to be complete bcoz of my over choosy nature. I'mperson whose has a very deffrent liking for novels. There are only few no. of novels that has had me tied with them from the very begining. And girl! Your work has made me indulge in it like hell! I can't remember the last time I read a novel all at once. However, it only had 10 chapters, but trust me, even if it was a 100 chaps book. I'd have cpmpleted it withing hours. And, It is not neccesary though bt still... if you can write more of this dose! I really loved it :)

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