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Samantha Lynn
Great potential!
I'm really enjoying your story so far. I like the dynamic between the friends and their difference in personalities. I found some grammatical and punctuation errors, but otherwise, the story flows nicely. The errors are an easy fix and there seems to be great potential here. I've only just read the first few chapters, but find myself wondering what will happen next with the new character introduced and the boy she's currently 'seeing'. I'll be continuing the read and following along for more chapters.
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I have not read any fantasy fiction in years, yet the first few chapters of your story have pulled me in. The plot of the story is very intriguing and I look forward to reading about this potential relationship Ciel and the boy may have. Your writing style and overall theme of the story make for an easy, pleasant read. I will be following along for more to the story!
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