SJ Bell

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Well done!

I really enjoyed what you've written so far! Re-writing movies etc is really popular nowadays and I think you've done a good job! Just be mindful of your punctuation and grammar and make sure your paragraphs aren't too long as this might make it confusing/overwhelming for your reader.

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Simply Poetic!

I've read the prologue and first chapter, and already I am hooked! I really can not wait to read more. I love the fact that although you haven't given much away in the first chapter, you leave the reader intrigued and wanting more. I really enjoyed your writing style and how descriptive it is. Even the prologue was very poetic and it really gave me a sense of what I was going to be reading.

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I've completed reading Roots Of A Curse and the author maintains the incredible poetic writing style throughout. You can just feel what the character's are feeling at any given moment. While the story is quite descriptive, there are instances where a handful of words are used multiple times. There's a few grammatical and punctuation errors - which is an easy fix with a thorough edit. There were times where I was a bit confused as to which character's point of view we were reading from, or how much time (if any) had passed since an incident/conversation etc, (but that may have just been me)
Regardless, this story was intriguing, dark and bloody - but captivating nonetheless. I look forward to more writing from not only this story in particular, but this author!

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