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🇿🇦🌸 Avid reader. Obsessed with insta-love romance. Author of Bet On You, available on Galatea. Enter into my world as I let the stories that live inside my head come alive.

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Beautifully written

This book had me questioning my morals because I KNOW what’s happening is wrong, yet I can’t put it down! 😂 It has that addictive Lifetime-movie feel of an obsessive ex, but the author does a great job of walking that fine line without making it creepy. If you enjoy messy, unpredictable stories that keep you hooked, definitely give this one a read!

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Surprisingly good

This was surprisingly good, and I ended up finishing it in one sitting! From the very first few chapters, I found myself drawn into the story. They were written in such an inviting way that I immediately wanted to keep reading and find out where the story would go. I really loved the development of the story and how everything unfolded. I thought the chapter lengths were great too. They were long enough to give each chapter substance without feeling overwhelming, which made the book very easy to binge. One thing I would have loved to see more of was the development of Sam and Annie's relationship. I would have really enjoyed watching that transition from the initial attraction to them slowly realising that they secretly have feelings for each other. I think seeing more of that progression would have made their relationship even more satisfying. I also felt that some of the attack scenes were a little rushed. I would have loved to spend more time in those moments and see them unfold in greater detail, especially given how significant they were to the story. And then there's the ending... 😭 As a romance author, I naturally want my happily-ever-after, so let's just say the ending wasn't exactly what my romance-loving heart was hoping for! 😂 Spoiler alert: I would have loved to see Sam and Annie get their HEA. That said, despite my feelings about the ending, I was genuinely surprised by how invested I became in this book. Overall, this was a really enjoyable read. The writing was good, the story pulled me in, and the characters kept me invested until the end. Definitely a book that I’m glad I picked up! ❤️

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Great plot

I’m really enjoying this story so far! The plot has already caught my attention, and I particularly love the female MC’s sassiness—she brings a fun energy to the story that makes her really enjoyable to read. I also love the slow-burn element and the sense that there’s more happening beneath the surface. The investigation surrounding the Valory account has definitely piqued my curiosity, especially with the mysterious warning Rayan receives. It left me wondering what’s really going on and what secrets are waiting to be uncovered. There’s a good mix of character personality, mystery and intrigue here, and I’m looking forward to seeing how everything unfolds. Definitely a story I’d keep reading to find out where the plot—and the characters—take us next! 🤍

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Compelling Plot

This is a beautiful story that explores coming of age, adulthood, love, and loss. It’s beautifully written, and the plot is incredibly compelling. I especially loved the shorter chapters, which made the story an easy and enjoyable read. I finished it in one sitting! I do feel that the story could have benefited from a little more context and development in certain areas, as some moments felt like they were being breezed through when I would have loved to experience them more deeply. One thing that almost deterred me from reading was that the chapter notes at the beginning essentially revealed the direction of the entire story. For me, that took away some of the curiosity and anticipation, so I would have preferred to discover those elements naturally as I read. Overall, this is a well-written and compelling story with a lot of heart. A beautiful read!

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Captivating start

I’m really enjoying "Bound By A Contract Connected By Fate" so far! ❤️ And I have to say, I absolutely love the cover — it immediately caught my attention and fits the vibe of the story so well! 😍 I really liked how we’re introduced to Kiara as a strong, independent woman who is focused on building her career and her own life. She has such a warm personality, and I especially loved the little moments that showed her caring nature toward the people around her. The beginning does a great job of establishing her everyday life while hinting that something much bigger is about to happen. I’m definitely curious about the mysterious man she’s going to encounter and how he’ll change the direction of her life. 👀 I also loved the little touches of faith throughout the story. It added another layer to Kiara’s character and made her feel more grounded. I only have a few small things that are more personal reading preferences. I found the chapters quite long, so I personally enjoy slightly shorter chapters. I’d also write the chapter headings out in full rather than using abbreviations like “Chp 3,” as I think it gives the story a more polished feel. I also personally prefer full paragraphs rather than having too many one-line sentences. I find that full paragraphs create a smoother flow and give me a better reading experience, especially when I’m really getting immersed in a story. But overall, I’m really enjoying it! The story has definitely caught my attention, and I’m curious to see where Casia takes Kiara’s journey. 🤍✨ Definitely one I’ll be keeping an eye on! ❤️

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Captivating story

I really enjoyed this book. The story pulled me in with its intriguing mystery and the secrets hidden within the archives. I loved how the fantasy elements were woven into the story without taking away from the developing romance. Arielle is such a fun character to follow. I loved her curiosity, her confidence, and especially the fact that she doesn't seem particularly interested in following the rules 😂 Her interactions with Riven are definitely one of my favourite parts. Their banter gives the story so much personality, and I really enjoyed watching their dynamic develop. The mystery surrounding the stones, the ciphers and the rogue gargoyle plot kept me curious about what was going to happen next. There is a great balance between the romantic tension and the larger story unfolding around them. I also really enjoyed the writing. The descriptions made the world easy to picture, particularly the Archives of Stone, and the dialogue kept the chapters moving. Overall, this is a really enjoyable fantasy romance with an intriguing mystery, a strong female lead and a grumpy hero.

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Engaging romance

I really enjoyed this book. The plot hooked me from the very beginning, and I found myself invested in Mason and Piper's journey from start to finish. The writing was strong, with excellent grammar and a smooth flow that made it easy to get lost in the story. I also appreciated the chapter lengths—they felt just right and kept me wanting to read one more chapter. The only aspect I struggled with was the frequent one-line paragraphs. While I understand they can be used for emphasis, they appeared so often that the reading experience felt a little stilted. It almost felt as though I was constantly pausing, which took me out of the story at times. I also would have loved to see more on-page tension between Piper and Reese, as I think it would have added another layer to the emotional dynamics. Overall, this is a well-written, engaging book, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I’m a sucker for a happy ending where love wins. I'm looking forward to reading more from this author.

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Well written and worth reading

I enjoyed the storyline and found it engaging overall. The writing itself is strong, with good grammar and language usage, making it easy to follow and enjoyable to read. That said, there were a few areas where the story felt a little choppy, and some transitions between events could be developed further to create a more cohesive flow. At times, it felt as though there were gaps in the narrative that left me wanting a bit more context or connection between scenes. I would also recommend looking at the paragraph spacing and formatting. Improving the layout could greatly enhance the readability of the book and make the reading experience smoother for your audience. Overall, this is a well-written story with a lot of potential. Well done to the author!

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Okay...I'm invested

I’m honestly blown away by how beautiful this story is so far. You really draw readers in from the very beginning and take us on such an immersive journey with Ellie—it genuinely feels like we’re right there with her. I also love how the side characters aren’t just in the background; getting little glimpses into their lives adds so much depth to the story. The chapters are on the longer side for my personal reading pace (I tend to enjoy around 1500–2000 words), but I’m still really invested and excited to keep going. I can’t wait to see how everything unfolds—especially Carson 👀 I need to know what caused that rift 😁 Such amazing work so far!

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The other side of romance

I loved this book. I usually tend to lean on insta-love stories where the main characters know their soul mate in the beginning but this book was a nice diversion from my norm. I thoroughly enjoyed a gleam into the the character's emotions and difficulties in finding a partner.

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