Sabrina Ettey

Love it!!

Wow! Just Wow! I really love this book. The mystery the author brought in the first place by adding a boy sitting ​in a coffee shop with two cups to order, but no one comes to join him as he drinks a cup and leaves another one was just perfect to catch reader's attention. I love Andrea and her friends. Especially, Lucas (If I remember him correctly) is so humorously amazing. I love them all. James and Andrea's chemistry is superb. I enjoyed every bit of it till the end though the ending got me sad a bit. I wanted James and Andrea to stay together forever. But overall, I love it!! The writing style is very catchy to attract people. Grammer and punctuation are good. I really want a part two of this story. This story really deserves a continuation.

Extremely Fascinating and Thrilling!!

Well, what can I say this story got a strong grip on me. I finished it at one sitting and I'm still having a hangover of it. It's that much captivating. The story was equally exciting and exquisite. I must say I enjoyed it way more than I expected. The characters are richly developed with each one having their own story to tell. The ever mysterious Aida was the spotlight throughout the whole story. It's just wonderful. I especially liked the way the author had named those chapters. Looks like a poem summarizing the whole story from beginning to end. It's truly a masterpiece which I recommend for everyone who wants to get lost themselves in the mysterious magic of Moonflower Hotel.

Interesting

This story has an interesting concept when it comes to the story plot. It's a captivating story with vampires and fairies (I love stories that has the word Vampire). I liked the character interactions very much here. I also loved the way writer has written the story. The flashback setting of the story turned out really good then I expected. The grammar is pretty good except for some typos. But I believe it could be easily edited with a reread. However, the only thing in the story needs to be focused is a detailed description of certain parts mainly the images of certain environment and characters. Though, I also wouldn't suggest going overboard with the description because sometimes too much description brings boredom to reading and decreases the review rate. Subtle and balanced description will do the trick. In the end, I believe the author understands her story much better than anyone else. Besides, this story has so much potential that I hope she will edit to her version of perfection. And, once she's done I'm sure this story will be a wonderful piece to read and recommend.

Good luck on writing! It was a nice read so far and I'll look forward to the future updates.

Interesting

The story was intriguing since the first chapter. The development of the plot since Emma moving to her grandmother's town was interesting. The mystery, the suspense was fun to read. The characters were thoughtful and captivating with each one having their unique aura of mystery to them. Though you could add more details on them throughout the novel. It had space for further growth and development, I believe. It's good nonetheless. The writing style is on the point, the pace was good. The only thing needed to enhance the writing would be a detailed description and a few edits. That's all. This book has the potential to be the best. With proper execution of this story, it can hit off the chart. Just have faith and keep writing!

Enchantingly Beautiful

What an amazing, dreamy and innocent love story it is! The lovers' name remains unrevealed, but I think that doesn't matter since the whole romantic environment and the main character's undying wish of love gets the majority here. However, this is an abridged story which also leaves the reader in want to read more. But I appreciate author's hard work to let out the real feelings of a lover throughout the whole writing. This is truly a brilliant piece of literature work. Keep writing!

Wonderful Story!

The Silver Lining story is an inspiration to all the disabled as well as the ordinary people who face difficulties in their lives. The way you've described the story is truly a brilliant work. Your technical writing is good here but needs a little bit of polishing. Then, you'll have a perfect story ready to share the message you've tried to tell here. Good luck with your future stories and keep up the writing :-)

Keep Your Promises.....

The story of two sisters with unexpected turns are the things that I loved the most in this Story. The emotions, sadness, determination of finding the truth with some unique ideas made the story enjoyable. Scarlett is an interesting character, and her back story is interesting either. Other characters played their role good as well. This story has a lot of potentials, to be honest. Only needs some polishing and fixes in writing style and also in grammar part as well. The writing style is like a big room where the author has a chance to attract the readers with many ways he wants. So, focusing on writing style is a must for a writer. Otherwise, it can distract readers and often discourages to read the story. Here are few things I'd like to say about your writing style. It looks right from the starting point. But the biggest problems are over-description, long paragraphs, and repetitive sentences. They are the red points of the story and main obstacles that don't let your story become a better one. Fixing them will make your story even more enjoyable. the detailed description is down below the comment section (Wanting to avoid spoilers) :)

Penelop The Vamp Hunter

From the start, the story is very intriguing. The flow of the story feels better till the end. Penelope is an interesting protagonist of the story. I loved her first introduction scene with Issac. Other characters are also interesting as well. I liked the interactions between the characters. Each scene is developed well according to the situations. You put the emotions correctly when needed. Fighting scenes are also another good point of the story which I loved here. Though, there are still some points in writing which sometimes felt like it would have written better. Polishing it a bit more will make the story flawless and more enjoyable. However, those little flaws couldn't keep me away from finishing it. Overall, It's really a great story I would like to recommend people to read. Hope to get more exciting Penelope ​stories from you. Good Luck! :-)

Stunning!

This is one of coolest stories I've read recently. Even though I'm still half way in the story. I already love it. The plot is attracting from the very first page. It kept me hooked specially to wait and see what Iziah will do. Iziah, the main protagonist of the story, a character that has the attracting dark vibe. I just love his action and fighting style. Other characters are also well developed throughout the story. Plot is, in one word AMAZING. The story flow is vibrant and the visualization the author showed is really catchy. The writing style is also pretty good and neat which kept me away from the distraction. Over all, it's a great story that needs to be read. I'm also looking forward to finish this story as soon as possible. I can't wait to discover the ending!

A story that's speaks the heart

If something I really enjoyed after the game version of Tomb Raider then that would be this beautiful writer's stories of Tomb Raider. Mostly The Golden Seal and then this Lilith's Scepter. Lilith's Scepter is very large and long story with more adventure and action that's worth a read. In my personal thinking the whole journeys should be divided into three pieces The first part was from the beginning to rescuing Radha, 2nd was from rescuing Radha to the prophesy and then 3rd from the prophecy to the ending. The blending of this three main journey was smoother which effected vastly on the story and I loved it. Then those side stories that helped to grow and develop the main story was brilliantly imaged. Some were true iconic in my opinion. Besides action and adventure, what caught my attention more was the emotional development of every character. From love emotion to hatred emotion of characters was so purely portrayed that I couldn't resist to love it. Overall, this story is not only a story now, it has blended in my emotion which I'd love to keep inside forever.

Interesting

The story was intriguing since the first chapter. The development of the plot since Emma moving to her grandmother's town was interesting. The mystery, the suspense was fun to read. The characters were thoughtful and captivating with each one having their unique aura of mystery to them. Though you could add more details on them throughout the novel. It had space for further growth and development, I believe. It's good nonetheless. The writing style is on the point, the pace was good. The only thing needed to enhance the writing would be a detailed description and a few edits. That's all. This book has the potential to be the best. With proper execution of this story, it can hit off the chart. Just have faith and keep writing!

Interesting Concept

The story had a unique and interesting vibe. I loved it from the very beginning and I'm glad I could read it. The grammar may have some issues but with polishing and editing, it could outshine other books. I loved it. Keep writing!!

Very Great

Before I even started reading, I knew this book would live up to my expectations and I'm glad that it did. Maggie was a very headstrong, determined and a caring character, I loved the way the author portrayed her throughout the story. Next, I loved Teddy's character. They both complimented each other even without knowing in the beginning. The other characters were marvelously developed. The plot was unique. The idea of NextGen is very refreshing and well thought out. The execution of the plans and the development of the plot is praiseworthy. I especially liked the description of the locations. It made me feel like I was there myself. Among all good things, I'd like to say there were a few hiccups in the grammar part but not that distracting anyway. Overall, it was a great story that I enjoyed. The author never disappointed me. Please keep writing. You have an amazing skill.

Good Story

Mine is a good teen story. The plot is enjoyable. The characters were well developed and I liked Cal very much, even more than his girlfriend! The grammar was pretty good. But the writing style was a bit difficult for me to follow up. Especially, the italic font in every dialogue. Also, you can tone down the use of slang a bit. It will make the story even more enjoyable, in my opinion. I hope the best for this story. Keep writing, you've got the talent :)

Exquisite!

It was a very interesting and beautiful story. The story shows how a woman can be independent and successful regardless of her gender and social position. It is like a message that anything can be achieved if one has a strong will and determination. This was brilliant!

The details, as well as character development, was equally praiseworthy. I was enthralled throughout the entire story and waited patiently until the end. And, it was never disappointing for once. I'd truly recommend this piece to anyone who enjoys a rich level of literature.

I really loved it and would love to see more of the author's work here. The writer is truly gifted!

Much Entertaining

I've just finished reading it, though it's still a work in progress. This was a really great story where a college girl Zunaira accidentally involves herself with a murder case. I really can't wait to see what happens in the future. It's that much enjoying! However, it's a bit fast paced and I don't mind it, though it'd be great if there were some details on emotional explanations. And, lastly some grammatical errors are there, but it's nothing editing can't fix. I'm really hoping for this story. Keep up the good work :)

Lovely and Cute

This is by far one of cutest and lovely children story I've read. This story brings a message that each of us is perfect in our way. It doesn't matter what is our name, our family condition, our status, and other things. We must be proud of ourselves. and our little Red is a great example of it. I especially loved the poem in the end. It's truly heart touching. This story is really a great piece of work!!!

Breathelessly WOW!!!

Must say, the author has managed to amaze me with the plot and the characters. Although romance is my place to explore, fantasy doesn't hold me much. But this one did!! I loved Ethan and Hannah's love chemistry and development throughout the whole story. Hannah is a lovely character who cares about family and friends and has a secret crush on Ethan. But the side of her I liked the most that she was brave and always in control with her feelings for Ethan until the end. Ethan on the other side is the coolest guy. With the strong determination to his job and strange physical and ability along with gentlemanly manners, he is truly a great man for Hannah. The story plot has some amazing twists and turns with kept me on the edge of my sit. Overall, a great story I'd love to recommend​ to all!!!

Good Thing!

The story plot is great. I loved it. Just the grammar punctuation and writing style was kind of distracting. But with the smooth polishing, it may shine like a pearl. :)

Good one!!

I must say, I'm not into erotic stories but this one was quite good. The story you've put there despite the sexual interaction was a good one I thought. Erotic parts were well managed and your writing style is good either. Overall, it was the good one for me.