Sabrina Ettey

Cooler Than Expected!!

From the starting, I was intrigued and eager to know what will happen next. Even now I'm stuck in the same feeling. The Narrative style was well along with good paced story telling. Relations and interactions between the characters were very catchy, emotional and tensed moments were in one word Fascinating. In the first chapter, I thought as if this was some abandoned and secret area of wild cold Russia at the first place. Well, the protagonists fight for survival, the refugees and the evil government and their destructive activities. All these were making me wonder that how could a father will save her sick daughter from all these chaos. A true a 'Page Turner' plot it was. However, despite some type mistakes, I didn't find any grammatical or technical error here. So, overall, This story was a deserved 5 Star story from the beginning point. The way you handled the story was way coolly than I expected. Keep writing more. You have a great talent!

A Half Orphan

From the beginning to end it was an excellent story. This was the story that most Asian person could relate where two people's unfinished love was neglected when Biju's having an unwanted and forced marriage with Renu. The struggle of Renu, Biju and Anshu was truly heart-touching throughout the whole story. Author's writing style and use of English language and grammer were really appreciative. I loved the whole setting of the story. A truly recommended book. Love it. Hope to see more from Arya :-)

Wonderful Story!

The Silver Lining story is an inspiration to all the disabled as well as the ordinary people who face difficulties in their lives. The way you've described the story is truly a brilliant work. Your technical writing is good here but needs a little bit of polishing. Then, you'll have a perfect story ready to share the message you've tried to tell here. Good luck with your future stories and keep up the writing :-)

Keep Your Promises.....

The story of two sisters with unexpected turns are the things that I loved the most in this Story. The emotions, sadness, determination of finding the truth with some unique ideas made the story enjoyable. Scarlett is an interesting character, and her back story is interesting either. Other characters played their role good as well. This story has a lot of potentials, to be honest. Only needs some polishing and fixes in writing style and also in grammar part as well. The writing style is like a big room where the author has a chance to attract the readers with many ways he wants. So, focusing on writing style is a must for a writer. Otherwise, it can distract readers and often discourages to read the story. Here are few things I'd like to say about your writing style. It looks right from the starting point. But the biggest problems are over-description, long paragraphs, and repetitive sentences. They are the red points of the story and main obstacles that don't let your story become a better one. Fixing them will make your story even more enjoyable. the detailed description is down below the comment section (Wanting to avoid spoilers) :)

Penelop The Vamp Hunter

From the start, the story is very intriguing. The flow of the story feels better till the end. Penelope is an interesting protagonist of the story. I loved her first introduction scene with Issac. Other characters are also interesting as well. I liked the interactions between the characters. Each scene is developed well according to the situations. You put the emotions correctly when needed. Fighting scenes are also another good point of the story which I loved here. Though, there are still some points in writing which sometimes felt like it would have written better. Polishing it a bit more will make the story flawless and more enjoyable. However, those little flaws couldn't keep me away from finishing it. Overall, It's really a great story I would like to recommend people to read. Hope to get more exciting Penelope ​stories from you. Good Luck! :-)

Stunning!

This is one of coolest stories I've read recently. Even though I'm still half way in the story. I already love it. The plot is attracting from the very first page. It kept me hooked specially to wait and see what Iziah will do. Iziah, the main protagonist of the story, a character that has the attracting dark vibe. I just love his action and fighting style. Other characters are also well developed throughout the story. Plot is, in one word AMAZING. The story flow is vibrant and the visualization the author showed is really catchy. The writing style is also pretty good and neat which kept me away from the distraction. Over all, it's a great story that needs to be read. I'm also looking forward to finish this story as soon as possible. I can't wait to discover the ending!

A story that's speaks the heart

If something I really enjoyed after the game version of Tomb Raider then that would be this beautiful writer's stories of Tomb Raider. Mostly The Golden Seal and then this Lilith's Scepter. Lilith's Scepter is very large and long story with more adventure and action that's worth a read. In my personal thinking the whole journeys should be divided into three pieces The first part was from the beginning to rescuing Radha, 2nd was from rescuing Radha to the prophesy and then 3rd from the prophecy to the ending. The blending of this three main journey was smoother which effected vastly on the story and I loved it. Then those side stories that helped to grow and develop the main story was brilliantly imaged. Some were true iconic in my opinion. Besides action and adventure, what caught my attention more was the emotional development of every character. From love emotion to hatred emotion of characters was so purely portrayed that I couldn't resist to love it. Overall, this story is not only a story now, it has blended in my emotion which I'd love to keep inside forever.

Enchantingly Beautiful

What an amazing, dreamy and innocent love story it is! The lovers' name remains unrevealed, but I think that doesn't matter since the whole romantic environment and the main character's undying wish of love gets the majority here. However, this is an abridged story which also leaves the reader in want to read more. But I appreciate author's hard work to let out the real feelings of a lover throughout the whole writing. This is truly a brilliant piece of literature work. Keep writing!