Salis Forest

Netherlands

I am 18 years old and I enjoy writing very much. I hope you enjoy reading my stories just as much as I like writing them.

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Clandestine Heart

I really like your writing style and your characters. They are complex and realistic enough to be perceived as human beings. The plot makes you want to keep reading this book. You want to find out what happens to the characters and what has happened to them.
I like your story very much and recommend people to read it, but I would advise you to read your chapters again and improve the technical writing skills. There are some errors in the grammar and expressions. If you fix these errors, it will make the story much more enjoyable.

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Keep going

I really really like your cover. It makes you want to read the story. I really like the way you write and the way tension was built up. So a thumbs up for the plot and your writing style. The grammar and your word order, however, could use an update.
I myself do not live in an English-speaking country. I was recently advised to download "Grammarly" and bookmark "GrammarCheck". This helps me a lot, though it does not register each mistake. Maybe you could also try out these to help improve your story.
Overall, I really liked your story and I hope you will keep writing.

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Yaaay, I'm the first to review

I absolutely adored your story for those twelve chapters it lasted. The characters are funny, charming and pretty realistic. I really like your plot and you have a writing style that makes people want to keep reading. Honestly, I thought there'd be dozens of reviews, seen how much I enjoyed the story. You have a talent for writing and you ought to use it. I strongly recommend anyone to read this.

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Royal Alpha Jackson

It was a really fun book to read. Nice character development. The way it's written makes you want to keep reading it.

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