Sally Rust

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This is a really interesting and gripping story. The writing style is excellent and really pulls you in. There is so much tension you can't help but read chapter after chapter, all in one sitting. I personally don't think the swearing is necessary, and cutting back on it would open the story up to a wider age-range of readers without compromising the integrity of the story. All in all - I can't wait for more! Good job.

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