Sam A.B

Learn to read before you could write.

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Thriller packed.

A great start. I fell in love with this book already. Everything seems to be advancing in a great flow. Though there are some grammatical errors. But they should not be given any attention. I really liked the way you started this chapter, simple and efficient vocabulary. Keep the pace. You really have the talent. Can't wait to see what you hide for the second chapter. Try using Grammarly. It would save you a lot of time while writing and would reduce the burden of editing.

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