Samantha L. Mildenhall

Birmingham, UK

Weird is wonderful. Dragons are beautiful. Cerberus a girl's best friend. Not even Sherlock Holmes can unlock the inner workings of my mind. Strange but true.

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Wonderful View

I've read this a couple of times and I can see myself re-reading this gem. I love steampunk and fairytales so mixing the two made my day. It's different and yet the same to the original fairytale, although it's not a copy. So many times when someone tries to re-write a fairytale they come out wrong but not here. This is a truly wonderful story in its own right. A round of applause for the author.

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Scientific Facts

First off I will say this caught my eye due to the two galaxies colliding, which I know to be scientific fact. The plot of the story is well thought out, with real science mixed in. I believe the author has a clever way of blending fact with fiction. The first bit to me feels like a science book, with all the detail and to some readers whom may not know or care for space, might be boring. I say this because to readers like those may stop reading to get to the heart of the story. Which would be a shame. It could also have the feeling of going on about something that could be seen unimportant to some readers. I know about space and all the information was correct, but even I felt it to be a little long winded for the start of a story. The writing style is not really for me, but that's not saying this isn't a good story. I would say a touch too informative, but that's me. As it's a novel, they are naturally long and whatnot.

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Great imagination

I love the imagination behind this work. It shows great thought and has a wonderful foundation. It's a cute short story. Myself I would like to see it grow in length, maybe more detail on surroundings and whatnot, but that's me. I hope for more work, as I see this author has an imagination for writing. Keep going from strength to strength.

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