Sapphirian J.

Alpha slave mate

I love the book so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!

The Fallen

How often will you update chapters? I'm looking forward to finding out how everything turns out. 🥰 It's a great start. However some editing needs to be done. Can't wait for more!

Moon

I have enjoyed this book from the get go and I'm hooked. It's very well written and descriptive. I can't wait for more chapters. An amazing book so far for sure. 🥰 When will you be adding more chapters so I can make sure to come over and read them? I'm excited to see what happens next! 🥰

Love 😘

Other than needing a quick editing session this book is great so far. I look forward to reading more chapters as they become available. 😘🤩

Loves Enigma

Loves Enigma is a wonderful book so far. I can't wait until more chapters are uploaded. I love a good mafia romance.

Simple Chemistry

I have only read six chapters so far but I am loving this book so far. It takes me back to my teenage years. What it's like to fawn over someone and not realize they felt the same way about you. Then bam. ❤️🥵 I can't wait to read more!

We Are Not Alone

This is such an amazing book! 🥰 I have only read nine chapters but so far I have been on an amazing journey. It's sensual, sweet, sappy, has a bit of drama here and there. But WOW there is so much comedy as well. This is an amazing book and a must read for sure. ❤️

The King

I can honestly say that I'm intrigued to read more. I think my issue is the book can be overly descriptive at times. I'm crazy when it comes to that sort of thing. Most readers love that sort of thing. I tend to get distracted from the plot though. So my apologies. Otherwise I am loving the book so far and can't wait to read more.

Sexy🥵Spicy🔥

I am absolutely in love with this book and can't wait to read more chapters🤩🥰🥵🔥

Amazing 🤩

Just the title of this book pulls you in. It's an amazing book and well worth the read. I loved it 🥰

Helping Other's

I enjoyed this book very much. Each chapter pulls you in and keeps you wanting more. A must-read for sure!

Sensual🥰Captivating😍

I adored this book. It is well written and enticing. A must-read for sure. Good job author 👍🤩😍

Sweet and Sexy

I loved the book! The ending was a surprise but welcomed! : )

Only problem I had was the dialogue needs a little restructuring. Other than that this book was great! Awesome job author!

Emotional 😭 Well written ☺️

This book has brought tears to my eyes more than once. It is an amazing drama that is well worth reading. I can't wait for more chapters. 🤩

I am not okay

This book is a must read for sure. But grab your tissues because you will need them. 😢

I can relate to pretty much everything the protagonist went through in this book. Even down to the smallest minute detail. It's very well written and the descriptive text describing her emotions are very well played out so you feel as if you yourself are there.

Make sure to pay attention to the warnings at the beginning because there may be triggers that can be harmful to some. If you have issues with depression and self harm, know that you are not alone. Seek help.

The Forsaken Luna

Seven chapters read, but I read fast so it might say four. Don't pay attention to that. So the grammatical issues are few and far between. This book is very well written. It literally pulls you in and leaves you wanting more. I have so many things to say, but I can't because I'm afraid to leave spoilers. But my goodness! You'll be crying at some points then laughing the next. I'm not sure what else to say at this point except that this book is great! A must read for sure! AUTHOR! Please make sure to update as regularly as possible! I only have two chapters left so.......

Mystery of the silky waves

At first I was like: How is it that there are 200 and some odd pages and only 9 chapters. Then I started reading and realized there are at least 3-4 chapters in 1. So even though I read fast I was only able to get 2 chapters in.

The plot is intriguing so far for sure. There aren't many issues as far as grammar.

For future reference. If the author is looking to put their book on a paid site like Dream, GoodNovel, iStory or what have you. You may look into breaking the chapters up into smaller chapters. Anything over 2500 words would be a bit aggressive.

If this book were on a paid site like GoodNovel readers would have issues paying for chapters. Grant it, I know it's free here and readers love long chapters. Just, if you are planning to take the book elsewhere. I would definitely break the chapters down into shorter chapters.

Obsession! Awesome!

In all honesty given that English isn't your first language. Your grammar is better than most. Even better than mine actually. It’s hard to find a good mafia romance.

This book is amazingly well written. The plot is awesome and flows gracefully. I'm sad to have reached the last chapter available. I can't wait for more chapters! Please update as soon as possible 🙏

Led By Sight

Needed to update my review from before. Because I've read several chapters since chapter Two! 😘 I love this book more and more with each passing chapter. The plot is intriguing and I guarantee you, you will get hooked right off the bat. It's very well written and I can't wait for more. ❤

The Shadow Rogue

I spent several years on my own as a single mother. Searching for love and getting burned when they can't accept the fact that you have children. So I understand where she's coming from.

This is an awesome book. It pulls at my heart strings. It's dramatic yet intriguing and even had some comedic relief written into it. Hope to read more.

Alpha's

I love the banter between all of the characters 😉😂🤣 There is a sense of suspense as well as having some comedic action. The book is well written so far. Can't wait to read more, when more chapters are provided! 😊

The Edge Of Reason❤️

This book gets better and better with each passing chapter. It's wonderfully written and flows perfectly. I have loved every moment. I can't wait for the next chapter to be released! 🥰 Good job author. Thank you for sharing your works with us!

Raw Society (Intrigued and can't wait for more)

I had to rewrite my review and I'll most likely do it again as more chapters are added 😘 But I'm growing fonder and fonder of this book with each chapter. And it sucks because I can't give spoilers by talking about the characters. But... There is an element of surprises throughout. Oh my goodness! Please! I need more chapters!

Children's draft

I was surprised at how well written this book was, written. No grammar issues or anything really. None that jumped out at me anyway. The chapters are lengthy and full of action. Like you can actually see yourself in boot camp with these poor boys.

I honestly got hooked and only had to step away due to the fact that I'm a writer myself and had to write out a chapter. I'll definitely be back though as soon as I am able. It's a great read so far. Thank you for sharing this with me.

Romantic Halloween

I actually think it's quite interesting. Only issue is her thoughts make it look like she's talking out loud to herself. I don't know, that was tripping me out. Other than that I like the book so far.

Unbound

Anxiously awaiting more chapters. ☺️ I love the start and can't wait to see what happens next.

All her favorite songs

This book is heart wrenching and beautifully written. It's written in a way that you feel you are there. My goodness. I've never been in this position but I know others who have gone through this. I can't wait to read more.

Amazingly Well Written

This book is very well written. The descriptive text of characters, surroundings and everything else in between makes it to where you can actually imagine yourself being in each character's shoes. A must read for sure. 😘

Shattered Glass

I have gotten several chapters in and I can say that this book is intriguing. It keeps you wanting more. Definitely worth reading.

The Kings Slave

I've only gotten a third way through the book! But my goodness! The author states that the chapters aren't edited and it shows, but it's easy to form what should be. So beyond grammar and punctuation this book is absolutely amazing thus far. A must read for sure! 😘

Silver Vengeance

My goodness y'all! I have only gotten halfway through this book so far! But wow! Silver Vengeance is suspenseful, sometimes hilarious and keeps you on the edge of your seat. Just when you think you have it all figured out a twist comes into play that will leave you gawking in awe. It is very well written and I guarantee that you will have a hard time putting it down. A must read for sure.

The Inevitable War

As someone who was bullied back in the day I can relate to this poor boy. I am intrigued to read more, for sure. My only issue, were the long winded paragraphs in the first chapter. The second chapter was written out in a way that the book and plot seemed to flow better.

Can't wait for the next episode. Bring it on.

Soren 🤩 Incredible 🤩

Another mind-blowing book coming from you Mary! You have wonderful writing skills! I can't wait for more chapters!

Absolutely Fantastic

This book was incredible, and well written! 🥰 I couldn't put it down! You are an amazing writer! I can't wait to read your other books as well! 🥰

Absolutely Wonderful 🥰🤩

I love books like these! You did an amazing job bringing the characters to life.

I loved every minute of reading this book. Thank you so much!

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! 🤩☺️🥰

My goodness! I almost bit my husband's head off when he distracted me from my reading.

I love this book so much! I can't wait for more chapters! A must read for sure! WOW!

Interesting

This book is quite interesting and keeps you on your toes.

The Gourmet Gladiator

A brilliant action packed book that I couldn't put down! I absolutely loved it! Thank you author for sharing your amazing talent to us all! A must read for sure! : )

Her Forbidden Fruit

I will definitely be recommending this book for all of my friends to read!

It is amazingly written, and it sucks you in from the get-go!

You are a talented writer! Thank you!

I absolutely loved this story!😍

I loved this story so much. I couldn't put it down😍

The Gangsters Unknown Assassin

Five stars from me! This is definitely a must read!

Theron 2

Theron Book Two was actually my favorite out of the book series! I'll vote over and over again for this book. My goodness! You are an amazing writer! Can't wait for your next book! 🥰

Theron

This book was beyond amazing! I had a really hard time putting it down! If I didn't have kids I would have sat and read the whole book in one night! The book Theron is captivating, and it lures you in! My goodness! A must read for sure!

I'm absolutely loving this book! Theres really not much I dont like. Except Grayson acting weird the next day after getting back to the pack house.

I absolutely love this book! I'll definitely buy it once it is published! I have several friends who would be interested!