Saturn

Hi! Do you mind if I ask you to do a review exchange? I've recently read your review and I liked the way you did it and pointed out the shortcomings. I kind of want to ask you what you think of any of my stories (you can choose anything that you like) just so I can improve. Thank you so much!!

Hey friend! Up for a review exchange? I am looking for some honest reviews on my latest novel, “The Unbroken Spirit”. I would love to review your work too. Lemme know if you are up.❤️

Hi just dropped a review on your book. I enjoyed the story even though it was short, it still has potential. Just a few things I want you to think about. Backstory or the importance of your sub characters like Evans. who and what is he to your protagonist? And maybe while August and Kenzie are "fighting" throw in some internal thoughts so that your readers can connect with August. Subtle mentions of cameras, "Tarot Tonight," and Margaret hint at a larger world and context for August’s struggles. Expanding briefly on these elements (without overloading the scene) could enhance intrigue. For instance, what role do cameras play in her life, and why does she despise Margaret's readings? A little bit of backstory there will help your readers understand August frustration. But overall your story is great and it really has potential. Keep writing you have a gem in the making. Good luck with the rest of the book. I will come back when it's done to see how you improved.