Scarlet Wolf

Under the Ocean

Writer β€’ Reader β€’ Sketch Artist β€’ Nyctophile οΈ±Trilogy : Dormant Series [Beginning]

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Young Energy

Eye catching. I would certainly give this book a chance, but the grammar and punctuation needs building up. You've got potential. Keep it up! ;)

- S.W.

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Potential

You've got some energy as I've noticed in your first chapter. Work more on your grammar, punctuation and structure. Try to look for more unique vibes since its an FF you're working on. I wouldn't want a young spirit to get demotivated; get more on scratching the surface of your skills to get the gems. Rooting for you! ;)

- S.W.

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Emotional Web

Rating from the prologue to your first chapter, I'd say that was one dizzy rollercoaster for my heart and it caught me off-guard to have the characters right in the middle of a dilemma. Interesting enough, the prologue was unique and detailed, although a hint or two of the main characters could add the cherry on top. There were silent punctuation errors, however it is minor, so you don't have to worry much. The grammar had quality which lead me to definitely think of your potentials. The visual imagery was vivid and clear that I could make it out well. It quiet intrigued me of how you've got the word "Love" all wrapped up in a package nicely for us readers to contemplate about. I've gone to your Wattpad page and it looked like this book has caught the imaginative minds of many readers. To swiftly comment on characters, the build up, which I'm looking forward too, excited me when I noticed your choice of names; reminding me of the genre you've chosen and how they fit well with its seductive atmosphere. Rather spicy and elegant. The awaiting chapters will keep me on my toes for sure. Keep it up! ;)

- S.W.

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Immersing

Your writing style intrigued me and I loved the balance in some chapters, especially the beginning. I look forward to it. Keep up the great work! ;)

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Hooked

The synopsis was rather intriguing and I suppose its mystery was the reason as to why I was lured in. There were a few technical grammar and punctuation that I know you can edit out. Nonetheless, I loved the first chapter and hope you can keep me intrigued till the end. The characters you've introduced have me having assumptions on whether they're going to be closer than friends; especially Ryker. The suspense hanging in the air shoots tingles through my toes. Keep up the great work! ;)

- S.W.

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Caught in a Web

I've enjoyed it so far, but it needs immense work on grammar and punctuation. I've liked it and you've got the potential that needs uncovering. Don't feel demotivated, instead take the reviews as a way to push through and take advantage off. Wish you luck. Keep up the great work! ;)

- S.W.

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Intrigued

The plot was appeasing and lured me in to check out your book. The grammar and punctuation did bother me in the first few chapters, but nonetheless, I'm sure you can simply edit it. You've got potential! There's nothing wrong in polishing here and there, as well as the character development-which I'm yet to see. I'm willing to give your book a try. Keep up the great work! ;)

- S.W.

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Hooked

I'm definitely on board this story and looking forward to its epilogue. The only default would be the grammar and punctuation; overall, I loved it till the present. Keep up the great work!

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Great Potential

You've just began so don't worry! Your plot might seem cliche but I'm sure you can create a more diverse story than what the eye sees. The grammar and the punctuation do need some tuning, but I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the book along with the development of the characters; especially Kate and Lawrence. Keep up the great work!

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Heart Touching

The ending was rather...depressing, however I loved the way you've spun the story. I enjoyed it, but it could improve more on the grammar and structure as well as the punctuation to keep readers really hooked. Great work! ;)

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Caught in the Web

I'll definitely recommend this book as the plot is rather engaging. The only defaults were the grammar and some punctuation, overall, it's a story with full potential! Keep it up. ;)

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Potential

I'll give this book a try, not only is it interesting, but because your plot had given me a reason too.

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Potential

This book will certainly give me another unique taste and I'm looking forward to reading it. Keep up the great progress! ;)

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Eye catching

The blurb itself had easily swooned me to reading the first chapter. I'd definitely give your book a reading. Great work! Keep it up. ;)

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Intrigued

Upon reading the blurb itself, I've been lured into your world of wolves. I loved the way it's been weaved. Keep up a great job! ;)

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Potential

I've taken a look through and decided it was worth the shot. Going to enjoy it! ;)

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Exciting

Definitely worth recommending. I love the way you've made the imagery clear and outstanding! I love this genre and you've made me fall in love with it all over again. I can't wait for the epilogue of this book and hopefully a sequel is lingering somewhere in that creative mind of yours. Keep up the great work! ;)

- S.W.

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Head over Heels

The quality and structure of how it was woven engaged me from the beginning. Every inch of the story brings out more hooks for me to latch on and the fact that it wasn't cliche made my day. You've got potential and there really isn't much I can say about the grammar and punctuation but that it's not easy to stay within the line, so just be careful here and there. Your style of writing is amazing and clearly you've got this! ;)

- S.W.

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Hooked

The genre you've chosen is a favorite of mine, thus why I had been easily swayed into reading it. I loved the way you've structured and weaved through it with twists. The characters have their own unique touches as well, and I am so on the same platform with the bad boy. Definitely worth the read. Keep up a great work! ;)

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Enthusiastic Start

You have an amazing talent which you need to polish even further to get to the gem. Stay strong with the flow and never get demotivated! Try to flourish more of the character traits and the grammars need more tuning so the story has a rigid base; try exploring more areas and look into it deeper to engage readers further. You've got some potential energy within and I'm curious to see how it goes. Keep us getting hooked!

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