Scarlet Wolf

Under the Ocean

Writer • Reader • Sketch Artist • Nyctophile ︱Trilogy : Dormant Series [Beginning]

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Highly Recommend

Two words; Captivating and Dynamic. This new book is already on my top favorites on Inkitt so far. I'd stay updated on this book, it's rather my type and would love to glide along with your novel. The punctuations were minor details that can probably be fixed when you edit it, but other than that, your writing style and structure were enchanting as well as evocative and exhilarating. Keep on writing! ;)

- S.W.

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Mystified

Growing and dynamic. The plot and its characters are in the process of developing, but I enjoyed the stigma weaved in it. I'm quiet curious of how the protagonists will end up together without death tailing them. It stirs on the action and thrill. The grammar and punctuation could do some polishing, but it hadn't stopped the flow of story. Keep on writing! ;)

-S.W.

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Young Energy

Eye catching. I would certainly give this book a chance, but the grammar and punctuation needs building up. You've got potential. Keep it up! ;)

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Caught in a Web

Two words: dynamic and wild. The plot had me lured in, and mystified by the intriguing situation in the first few chapters. The title itself is rather peculiar and eccentric. The story, however, fitted its genre, and proves to be tempting from the beginning. The kinks and BDSM were enough to satisfy a beast in mind, and I quiet enjoyed reading it! Both protagonists were fetching and magnetic. Therefore, I'd like to continue on with this unique series and discover out more of the thrill in this book. The grammar and writing style were almost hit on; a few polishing could do the trick. I'd recommend this to readers who enjoy the supernatural and steamy— but quirky erotic. Keep on writing! ;)

-S.W.

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Intrigued

The first few words I landed on was Heidi's full name, and immediately it lured me in. The grammar and writing style was clean, transparent and the structure was on point. Fascinated and mystified by the origins, I thought it to be unique and since the characters were the ones that's making the story alive — yours happened to have shined on the first chapter itself. I'm interested and enjoyed the idea of your plot. Keep on writing! ;)

-S.W.

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Intrigued!

Yet another novel that's a page-turner. I hope to enjoy this one as well! Keep on writing. ;)

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Engrossed

I've just begun, and everything is still pin-point. Keep on writing! ;)

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Caught in a Web

Addictive. Spine-tingling. Page-turner. The grammar and structure was on point and the flow of the lines were great to set my eyes on. The first chapter itself was filled with warmth, confusion. character introductions and this hooking nail. I loved the following chapters and how she got sucked into the supernatural. Roland turned out to be a romantic in the end and ironically, Count. Basically, you've made this book have a reason as to why it should be a great seller if you're ever to publish it traditionally. I'd like to recommend this book due to its consistency in keeping the reader anticipated. Keep on writing! ;)

- S.W.

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Caught in a Web

Intriguing and my way of reading a novel under a storm. I've just begun, but the chapters drove me here to give my full response on this story. It's rather interesting with how you've written the dying souls in the earlier chapters, before we were introduced directly to the the female protagonist, and I can say two words; emotional and connected. The Grimm Reaper has this charm that allured the readers and is by far rather charming, and almost innocent like, ironically, but that's the vibes I got in the initial chapters. I'm yet to delve deeper, but I loved reading it so far. Your grammar and structure has been steady and just the right pace. Keep writing! ;)

- S.W.

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Unique

Captivating. Original. Imaginative. The first chapter itself is straight to the point and has an interesting concept where the setting is located in a not so cliche country. The flow of the story is interesting and I'm rather intrigued, but there were some minor points that I've picked up; the grammar and structure. You are a creative writer, and your book has potential, I'd read this book in the morning when the sun hasn't risen because of the unusual vibes you've created in it. Keep on writing! ;)

- S.W.

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Caught in a Web

Amusing, believable, and evolving. A story that many thriller/mystery readers would like to dive into. The way you've weaved it to bring in the attention was simple yet alluring. The only minor default I've noticed was the grammar and structure. It's a new story, so I'm pretty sure you'll get there, but overall, it's dark as well as fascinating. Keep on writing! ;)

-S.W.

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Caught in a Web

This book has an interesting plot which I'm willing to delve into. The grammar and structure as well as the way you've weaved them thoughtfully has me intrigued. I'm definitely going to try reading it. Keep creating amazing work! ;)

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Tactical

The summary was straightforward and filled with a mysterious idea, though the concept of the plot is rather intriguing. The first chapter itself was rather alluring, but a strong start. I enjoyed the way your grammar and writing style just sorts of weaves themselves together. Keep it up! ;)

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My type

I am incredibly infatuated by the summary and first chapter. Don't hesitate to upload the others! I 'm luv'n the flow and the interesting concept.

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Emotional Web

Rating from the prologue to your first chapter, I'd say that was one dizzy rollercoaster for my heart and it caught me off-guard to have the characters right in the middle of a dilemma. Interesting enough, the prologue was unique and detailed, although a hint or two of the main characters could add the cherry on top. There were silent punctuation errors, however it is minor, so you don't have to worry much. The grammar had quality which lead me to definitely think of your potentials. The visual imagery was vivid and clear that I could make it out well. It quiet intrigued me of how you've got the word "Love" all wrapped up in a package nicely for us readers to contemplate about. I've gone to your Wattpad page and it looked like this book has caught the imaginative minds of many readers. To swiftly comment on characters, the build up, which I'm looking forward too, excited me when I noticed your choice of names; reminding me of the genre you've chosen and how they fit well with its seductive atmosphere. Rather spicy and elegant. The awaiting chapters will keep me on my toes for sure. Keep it up! ;)

- S.W.

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Hooked

The synopsis was rather intriguing and I suppose its mystery was the reason as to why I was lured in. There were a few technical grammar and punctuation that I know you can edit out. Nonetheless, I loved the first chapter and hope you can keep me intrigued till the end. The characters you've introduced have me having assumptions on whether they're going to be closer than friends; especially Ryker. The suspense hanging in the air shoots tingles through my toes. Keep up the great work! ;)

- S.W.

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Caught in a Web

I've enjoyed it so far, but it needs immense work on grammar and punctuation. I've liked it and you've got the potential that needs uncovering. Don't feel demotivated, instead take the reviews as a way to push through and take advantage off. Wish you luck. Keep up the great work! ;)

- S.W.

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Intrigued

The plot was appeasing and lured me in to check out your book. The grammar and punctuation did bother me in the first few chapters, but nonetheless, I'm sure you can simply edit it. You've got potential! There's nothing wrong in polishing here and there, as well as the character development-which I'm yet to see. I'm willing to give your book a try. Keep up the great work! ;)

- S.W.

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Great Potential

You've just began so don't worry! Your plot might seem cliche but I'm sure you can create a more diverse story than what the eye sees. The grammar and the punctuation do need some tuning, but I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the book along with the development of the characters; especially Kate and Lawrence. Keep up the great work!

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Heart Touching

The ending was rather...depressing, however I loved the way you've spun the story. I enjoyed it, but it could improve more on the grammar and structure as well as the punctuation to keep readers really hooked. Great work! ;)

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Caught in the Web

I'll definitely recommend this book as the plot is rather engaging. The only defaults were the grammar and some punctuation, overall, it's a story with full potential! Keep it up. ;)

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Eye catching

The blurb itself had easily swooned me to reading the first chapter. I'd definitely give your book a reading. Great work! Keep it up. ;)

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Intrigued

Upon reading the blurb itself, I've been lured into your world of wolves. I loved the way it's been weaved. Keep up a great job! ;)

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Potential

I've taken a look through and decided it was worth the shot. Going to enjoy it! ;)

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Exciting

Definitely worth recommending. I love the way you've made the imagery clear and outstanding! I love this genre and you've made me fall in love with it all over again. I can't wait for the epilogue of this book and hopefully a sequel is lingering somewhere in that creative mind of yours. Keep up the great work! ;)

- S.W.

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Head over Heels

The quality and structure of how it was woven engaged me from the beginning. Every inch of the story brings out more hooks for me to latch on and the fact that it wasn't cliche made my day. You've got potential and there really isn't much I can say about the grammar and punctuation but that it's not easy to stay within the line, so just be careful here and there. Your style of writing is amazing and clearly you've got this! ;)

- S.W.

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Hooked

The genre you've chosen is a favorite of mine, thus why I had been easily swayed into reading it. I loved the way you've structured and weaved through it with twists. The characters have their own unique touches as well, and I am so on the same platform with the bad boy. Definitely worth the read. Keep up a great work! ;)

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Enthusiastic Start

You have an amazing talent which you need to polish even further to get to the gem. Stay strong with the flow and never get demotivated! Try to flourish more of the character traits and the grammars need more tuning so the story has a rigid base; try exploring more areas and look into it deeper to engage readers further. You've got some potential energy within and I'm curious to see how it goes. Keep us getting hooked!

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