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The plot of the dying soul merging with another and then her lover searching for any parts of her and finding a second chance of love got me tearing up a lot! I loved the star crossed lover theme! 💕✨ Looking forward for the second part as the ending felt abrupt .. I would love to read more of how they fall in love with depth not only cuz their meant for each other! I would of loved to have felt more strongly the emotional depth between them.. the writing style could level up just by diving deeper into that. Lots of potential! Thank you for sharing!🦋☺️🫰
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The plot and love story has so much potential! The first 60 pages though could be much more shortened and edited to keep it potent. I craved more to hear from the couple, the attraction and pull were strongly written just leaves me crave more. It was great to read in different POVs to being a diversity into the story, it was great at first to read how Carries ex lover perceived the couple, but once they joined the family the story lost all magic. Though you wanted to focus on society and its flaws, it could be written subtler and keep the romance in the main focus to not lose tension and interest of the reader. The ending was abrupt and left the reader like WTF why would it end this way? We need more of the couple! 🔥🔥🔥💕
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