Seth_A_Mott

A father first, a husband always, an author in my dreams.

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Excellent writing! Dark and mysterious!

This is very well written. It is dark and mysterious and very entertaining. This is a very good beginning, I look forward to reading more as it is released.

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Very interesting and unique

I really enjoyed this story. The author’s writing style is very unique, especially in the early chapters. The characters are great and the world is interesting and different. There were a few grammatical errors which I’m sure will be corrected with a quick edit, but the story is engaging enough that the errors don’t detract too much from the enjoyment of reading. There is some showing rather than telling, but it isn’t the worst example I’ve seen and it kind of works with the unique writing style. Overall this is well done, keep it up!

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Solid plot, needs a little editing

So there is a good story here. There are some grammatical errors, but those can be fixed with some editing. The setting could use a little more description, but the plot is good. Overall this is a good story. Keep up the hard work!

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A fantastic mythical adventure!

I love the story so far. There are a few grammatical errors and a couple instances of tense switching mid chapter, but these are nothing that can’t be fixed with a little editing. The plot and characters are excellent and I look forward to reading more.

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Thought provoking

This is a deep, moving, thought provoking story that is beautifully written. The writing style is unique and intelligent. Keep up the good work.

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Relic Huntress

I truly enjoyed reading this story and fully intend to read more. The character development is terrific, the dialogue is natural and witty, and the story is engaging. There is plenty of mystery to keep the reader interested and the characters are very relatable and enjoyable. This is a excellent book written by a talented author!

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Very nice!

The story and the writing gets better the further you read. The book is in need of some editing but there is a good story here. Keep up the good work!

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Excellent start!

This is an excellent piece of writing! This story is still in the early stages, but it is a great start! This author definitely knows how to write and I look forward to reading more as it is published!

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Engaging blend of YA romance and SciFi

I really like the juxtaposition of the different genres. It’s like The Selection meets a sci-fi story, and I really like it. The dreams and time-travelesque sequences are fantastic. There is plenty of mystery to keep you guessing as well. There are some grammatical/tense issues, but the author stated at the beginning that they are aware of these and has planned a round of editing when the book is finished. Once that is completed, this could be a five star book! Keep up the good work!

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This has a Twilight Zone feel to it!

I really enjoyed this story. I heard Rod Serling from The Twilight Zone in my head as I read it. There are some good mysterious qualities to the story, and the voice she hears is a nice spooky addition. Nice job and keep updating!

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Professional quality writing!

I have only read the first 9 chapters, but that is enough for me to say this is a very talented author. The pacing of the story moves along nicely. The descriptions are wonderful and vivid. The characters are fleshed out and well written. The authors writing style make the book very easy to read, and the spelling and grammar is next to immaculate. I am very happy I stumbled upon this book and exchanged reviews with the author! Excellent work and I look forward to finishing this story!

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Very good start!

I enjoyed the three chapters I have read. My favorite part is Emma’s inner dialogue/conscience, it is a fun addition. Nice work and keep it up.

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Excellent!

I read the first three chapters and thoroughly enjoyed them. The author clearly knows what they are dong. You would be hard-pressed to find any errors at all. The pacing and writing style are excellent and the story itself is engaging. Great job! I look forward to reading more.

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