Shendai

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Going mad...

You hear them too....?

I imagine this is a good description of what its like to actually be mad, describing what feels completely real and tangible, yet no one (seemingly) shares the experience. Good job capturing the frantic exasperation of someone who is flummoxed beyond belief by what they're experiencing. Smart choice keeping this focused as a shorter read, as it would likely become incoherent if extended.

Cheers.

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Persistence of Vision

As usual, excellent attention to the little details and continuous build up for the horror that is to come. Correctly captures the mindset and approach used by the Soviet government.

Thought there might be more exploration of the idea that we accidentally enabled form or material presence to something from the shadow realm. Was thinking it was inadvertent, where the original scientists were simply trying to bring more life to their original cartoon creation, but instead "scooped" up something sinister from the shadows and created a conduit for it to our world.

Excellent read overall, thank you.

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A to B

Excellent short read. Was wondering what direction this would go in, as lots of unpleasant things can happen with transporter technology (granted this wasn't Star Trek tech, but still.)

Would be interesting to see where this would go as a longer story. Almost a pod people kind of situation. I am intrigued.

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