I stayed up all night to finish this story and after few first chapters I stopped posting my annoying comments 😂😂.
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All and all, I enjoyed it. It has direct plot line, it’s focused on one main character, it’s not boring. Great job!
I’m a big fan of steamy things, and this piece has it plenty. Your writing is excellent, your vocabulary rich, only one thing got me out of a sex scenes and it’s a word phallus. I was like, what the heck? Good old c**k would be nicer for me, but okay 😂😂😂.
I put 4 stars for the plot because of Cadence. I wrote it in the comments and it stayed like it for the whole thing. The book is great, amazing actually, but I missed feelings in her. It was like she wanted a good looking guy with high social status but she didn’t care about love. I’m a romantic type, I need romance in a book like this. Eventually, she got what she wanted and yes, I’m real life, these things happen. But if I read a book, I want to experience weakness in main character’s knees, I want shivers and goosebumps. It had passion and great amount of sex, but with Mr.Forever, it should be much more than that.
Yet, it’s just my opinion and I recommend this book for everyone, who likes romance and personal tragedy 😬😬😬😂
Amazing job, thank you for sharing. ❤️❤️