Silver_specter

Italy

The dead walks. The evil runs. Astral is immortal. And the dark???...... well the dark cant be bound by the time....

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Good read overall

The story was terse and intimidating. The short chapters provided a really good read.
I would still suggest more of word play n grammar. The plot was good overall. The little descriptions too made it astounding.
Just a little more deep words, healthy grammar n you r done with it..lol
I am looking forward to read more of your work..lol.
(Sry if I had hurt u in any way, really sry. 😓😪. I didn't mean to do it. Hope u understand;)

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Good read

The plot was intense, n so it caught many readers.
There were many grammatical errors but who doesn't have them.
English is not your first language, right? Perhaps that's why you go wrong with grammar.
I would suggest u to practice more deeper word play.
Overall the book was good to read.
Keep going..

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Nice read

The book was really amazing. The conspiracy of the book is really really good. Few grammatical errors, but who doesn't have them.
After some editing the book would be set to go..
I would suggest u to inculcate more deeper word play in order to make the book a more better read and more attractive..
Overall the book is really good.
Keep writing!!

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Too good

The book is so amazing it just hold me all through. The name itself is attractive n forces us to read more. The terse chaps makes it more good to read.
Horror being my fav genre, it just made me read more.
I loved the plotline, a quite different one.
U have a little grammar errors, they won't take much efforts to edit.
Keep writing more...
:-)

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Good read

The book was truly amazing. It was terse but intimidating. I really loved the word flow and all the things..
U have few grammatical errors, but who doesn't have them?? After few editing it will be all set to go...
Anyways i really loved the plot. Keep writing😊🤘✌

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Good read

Your book was a too good read for me. I usually hate to read romance(i mean its not my type at all) but this was not that bad. Your plot was quite strong to grab my attention, n so i as when i finished with it, i decided to give it a review...lol
U had many grammar issues, which could be covered with editing.
U have a potential, n so i would suggest u to write more...lol
Waiting for more of your work.
Write soon...

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Good read

The book was really a good read. The chapters were a tas too, but i liked it although most of the readers don't.
The plot was a lot intense encouraging to read more. Your other books r good too. All i noticed that u made a lot a changes in your writing style from first work till here. Keep it up...lol
Anyways all u need more is a more deep word play( which u will definitely develop) to go professional.
Your co-writers too helped you much, and they receive their credit.
M waiting for your next work....lol
Write soon...

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Her Saviour

Your book is really amazing. It has a intense plot, which grabs the reader's attention. More I would suggest you really should upgrade more of your writing skills. I mean just work more with your grammar n work play. Rest all is awesome. I really loved it:)
Looking forward towards more of your work..lol.
(Sry, if I had hurt u in any way, really sry😓)

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Wow.

The book was awesome. All the emotions were conveyed with a lot ease. I am really looking forward to more of your work. Lol.

The plot got my hooked up, until I finally found I had read it completely. Waiting for more updates.

Keep going. 😊🤘

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