This review took me forever to get to, sorry about that. This story is amazing, it will turn out to be a novel I need to read if you end up getting the time to finish it. I found some parts a little confusing, some words are repeated too many times close together, and the story needs some punctuation and grammar work but other than that I think it is a well developed story that is on it's way to be something really exciting. Character development is my favourite part of writing, getting to see one's character come to life, and these characters of yours are developing fantastically. I hope you are able to finish this some day as I look forward to reading it.
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