You have no idea how skeptical I was to read this book, as it didn't seem like something I, personally, would normally be seen reading. But, man, am I glad I did! Honestly! This was amazing, I was completely hooked the entire time and Anne's character is protrayed beuatifully! A few structural mistakes, but, we ALL make those, so it didn't phase me, but I know those grammar Nazi's out there might take them into consoderation when reviewing this book so maybe fix them. But, I can't wait to finally be able to settle down and engage in yet another great book! If I had ANYTHING to criticize, which I think should be part of any constructive reveiw, it would be to work on the whole 'Show, Don't Tell" concept when writing some of the transition paragraphs. But overall this story was amazing, and flowed very nicely. The first chapter was a little long, but I hardly noticed because I just kept reading more and more and more as my interest in this book grew! Kudos to you! This was a great first chapter! Keep it up!
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