Skye Alnamar

Only the mentally unstable are welcome here...

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ACK, IM SPEECHLESS

Your writing style is so, so, sooooooo professional! It shocked me how perfecr and flowing your style was and how perfect your transitions were! I can already see some great characters beginning to form and it's only the strart! You're imagery is LITERALLY beyond words, it was truly phenomenal. I can not wait to read more, and this definitely deserved five stars and SO many more likes! The plot is already building up and the length of your chapters are the perfect length (long enough for events to happen and for the plot to build and to define your charactera, but not so long that it drags). I wish I had criticism to help you, but really I can't even think of anything. And, let me just say, that the way you began the chapter really just drew me in! Their were no dull moments in this book so far, and your descriptions were beautiful! Even your characters thoughts were on point and I really felt like i was in the book! I can not WAIT to read more! Fantastic job! Bravo!

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Amazing!

This is one of my favorite stories, and I read all of it in one sitting. I just could NOT put it down. The plot is amazing, and the way you incorporate certain events and thoughts is impecable. I really enjoyed hearing how conflicted Kiera was when making her decision, and how perfectly you weighed in her mood swings and reactions to situations. And, may I add, I LOVED when she went to Starbucks and ordered a whole bunch of sweet things, that was a classic moment, and was very well written. The only bad part is the incorrect changes in verb tenses that sometimes pop up, but other than that very well written.

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3 BILLION HEARTS

I literally love this book and everything about it!!!! I just-I can't put this into any other words but...YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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AMAZING

I just-I have no words. Honestly, I was hooked the entire time, you portrayed the sibling relationship phenomenally, and the creativity put into the names is so cool. This is sooooooo good so far, I can NOT wait to read more! The main character, her thoughts and emotions were just written beuatifully and shown so professionally I was shocked. Like, the part where she says, "And I hate people." Really was a moment where the readers could connect with that feeling of dread, as odd as that sound. And the beginning with the adventure with the flour, I really thought I was there, with them, watching the scene fold out in front of me. This story truly is phenomenal and I can NOT wait to read more!

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Impressed!

You have no idea how skeptical I was to read this book, as it didn't seem like something I, personally, would normally be seen reading. But, man, am I glad I did! Honestly! This was amazing, I was completely hooked the entire time and Anne's character is protrayed beuatifully! A few structural mistakes, but, we ALL make those, so it didn't phase me, but I know those grammar Nazi's out there might take them into consoderation when reviewing this book so maybe fix them. But, I can't wait to finally be able to settle down and engage in yet another great book! If I had ANYTHING to criticize, which I think should be part of any constructive reveiw, it would be to work on the whole 'Show, Don't Tell" concept when writing some of the transition paragraphs. But overall this story was amazing, and flowed very nicely. The first chapter was a little long, but I hardly noticed because I just kept reading more and more and more as my interest in this book grew! Kudos to you! This was a great first chapter! Keep it up!

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Amazing

You have no idea how much I love this novel! Your writing style just reins people in! Your word choice is impecable and fits how you developed Blair's character, along with the perfect amount of relatability in Blaire's thoughts, actions, and emotions in different situations really bring this story to life! I can not wait to keep reading, so far I have not been able to put it down.

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