Skye Sweven

Writer, Dreamer, Explorer twitter: @skyesweven

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Amazing Start

You've got remarkable talent in writing; especially in the fantasy/action field which is the category I am assuming this story falls under. So far, the characterization was quite mesmerizing and you have established the setting of the story very seamlessly on your first chapter. It's friendly to readers and easy to understand. I like how you chose exotic (for me, at least) names for the characters and places so that it exudes a unique atmosphere for this original piece of writing. The ending got me hooked, and I'm looking forward to the future chapters. Well done!

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