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Hooked!

Ah! Another one for the favourites list!

I love that the gaps are slowly filling themselves in and we aren’t just being TOLD what is happening. I have never read a shifter book before so I am not familiar with the rules and commonalities so this is totally fresh for me. The writing style is wonderful and the characters are intriguing and have depth. You’ve managed to create an entire world and society that is so vivid already in just a few chapters.

Really well done and I’m excited to have another book to follow!

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A hidden gem!

What a little gem! This Cinderella story has such a fun and refreshing plot. The characters are intruiging and enchanting, and the author has a great sense of humour. The little flirtations between the characters are adorable.
However, my favourite thing about this story is the writing style. She is a master of personification. Some of the descriptions she uses are incredible. I found myself wanting to take screenshots to share which ones I loved the most. Some are them are just stunning.
This story has so much potential and I think with a little extra proofreading to fix the little grammar mistakes we writers ALWAYS miss the first time, this could be something really special. It is rare that books end up on my favourites list (I think maybe 25% if that), but this one is going there. I couldn't put it down!

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Binged it!

It’s fun! Super bittersweet to have the female lead be torn between two really good men.
The writing is pretty smooth and flows well. I didn’t have any trouble binging all of the chapters. I loved how in depth the author went with the characters inner turmoils. It really brought the characters to life. They are all flawed, which only makes the story more believable.
Super good job!

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Good start

I like the way the author writes her characters. She does a good job with the subtle body language and emotional clues. I’d love to we see the scenes and the environment fleshed our even more. Give me that detail. Make me feel Everything!

I’m interested to see how it progresses.

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Excellent!

I've only read a few chapters so far but I am so intrigued. It's so different from most of what I have read on here, not only in theme and plot, but also in tone. The author does a great job of creating a detailed scene that you feel like you are a part of. I was holding my breath for most of chapter 2.
I am very interested in seeing what direction the author takes this story. He leaves JUST enough explanation out so the reader is left dying to fill in the blanks. The hint of magic and mystery caught my attention, and I am looking forward to exploring the different relationships between the members of the Circle.
This will continue to stay on my reading list!
Also, Goose is an EXCELLENT name for a dog.
Super well done. Your writing is fantastic.

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I find this super original (despite other comments)

I was looking through these reviews about it being an overused story (I mean… given that werewolf books are basically their own genre, that’s like saying that romance books are overdone…). It’s the elements within the story that make it original. This is the first werewolf book I have read where the protagonist was a single mother. This is the first one with the perspectives of both main characters AND their wolves. This is the first time I’ve come across the night god and the idea of identity theft within the mind. It is all of these elements that make this book intriguing.
While I was unsure of the male lead at first and their relationship (way too many pet names for a guy with no experience with women). He was almost too perfect? I loved that the main character recognized that and was suspicious but then she just kind of let that go. Nobody is that comfortable with their emotions when they haven’t had the opportunity to practice those skills. However, his less favourable traits made little micro appearances but I would have loved to have seen him become a little more human, especially given his human blood. My only other complaint is that the female lead is a little petty and manipulative, but I actually can’t complain about that because I just asked for the characters to be more human :P
Overall, I was really impressed with the plot and the dynamics between all of the characters (and there are a lot of characters whose personalities get solidified right away, so kudos for that). Her kids are absolutely adorable and I loved watching him go into protective daddy mode! I’m on about chapter 22 at this point and plan on finishing it! Will most likely update my review after as well :)
Great work!

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So beautifully written

Honestly I was blown away by this. The pacing is wonderful. The author is really taking her time laying the groundwork and developing really intriguing and three dimensional characters.
The writing style is wonderful. The perfect amount of detail. I feel like I’m there but it in no way takes away from the story.
Really exceptional work. Definitely adding this to my favourites list. I have a feeling it’s going to be a slow burn and I am ALL there for it!

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Lovely!

This story is so sweet! I was so pleasantly surprised with the strong ‘show don’t tell’ approach that the author takes. I really believe in letting readers fill in the blanks themselves and this author leaves just enough to the imagination to keep me hooked!
I also love the twists and turns! This book is definitely staying in my reading list !

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Interesting start

There are many catching things about this plot. The main character is well developed, and it was nice to see him in different stages of his life and to see his relationships with the wolves grow. What a sad life he has had.
The writing style is very different, but not in a bad way. My biggest critique is the spelling and grammar. But that’s nothing that some revisions and editing couldn’t fix.
I’m interested to see how he handles a relationship with another person. Will he be able to shift back and forth or is he a full wolf? Lots to find out!

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So good!

I knew I needed to get up at 6:30 this morning but that didn’t stop me from reading this until midnight last night. I couldn’t put it down!
I love her relationship with the little prince, and I’m hooked on discovering all of the secrets.
Both leads are powerful and confident and both equally intriguing. Fascinated by their relationship!!
The writing style is beautifully detailed and poetic. Keep up the great work!

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I like it!

I’m such a sucker for romances. I love how respectful this male lead is. He’s possessive, but never forces her to do anything and accepts her as she is. I can imagine feeling quite inferior if I couldn’t shift and was mated to a Lycan.
The pacing is good and the writing got better as the story went on.
All in all, very nice!

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Strong lead

I love the female lead! She is flawed in so many ways but you can still empathize with her.
I like her relationships with the dragons. I wish there was a bit more build up in the relationship between the two leads though

Overall I’m enjoying reading it :)

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Cool idea!

I love the idea of an all female pack! She is one badass lead as well!
I found myself excited to turn each page, which is always a good sign ;)
A few little pacing issues and some scenes that could be drawn out a little to make them more intense and hit a little harder emotionally, but the plot is super creative and well executed!
I am really impressed with the dialogue between the characters.
Good job!

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Really interesting world building!

I am really enjoying this story! The female character is a little judgy, but that's pretty typical of a high school girl. I love her two friends, and I felt their connection and bond right away.

It was a wonderful suprise to see that there aren't just werewolves, but shifters that turn in to foxes and cats.
The author has done a great job of leaving things up to the readers interpretation until things are revealed. She leaves us guessing constantly and I find myself flipping pages to find the answer. I am super intruigued by the female lead's history and what makes her so special, and then watch him slowly turn into a halfway functioning human :)

Really great work!

Update: I’m super hooked now. It’s in my favourites list :)

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Intrigued!

I’m loving this so far! I’m intrigued by the characters and can’t wait to find out what happens next. Some of your descriptions are 👩‍🍳😘

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