On a chariot of imagination pulled by wild horses, I am a Dreamer, Drifter, Rebel and Friend. With no anchor and no destination... I travel alone with stories inside my head.

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I love what you have written up to chapter 6 and I can't wait to read more! The plot is interesting and has the element of suspense which I need to keep the "pages" turning. I love the little details which enhance the interaction between the characters. I would definitely love to know how the story ends.

I did note some typos, punctuation and grammatical errors as did some of the other reviewers... but those are easy fixes with a bit of careful editing. I am also a very visual person, so aesthetics and presentation have a big effect on my reading experience. Might I suggest some spacing between paragraphs? I think it would help get rid of the cluttered look of the chapters and make them easy to read for people like me.

You have potential and I wholeheartedly encourage you to keep writing. All the very best!

Much love xx

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