Well, first of all, this is exactly the kind of story I love to read. A mixture of mystery, thought-provoking and intriguing.
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I love you writing style. It's distinct and clear. I had absolutely no trouble in painting a picture in my head.
The characters are something out of the ordinary. Especially Xavier. There is something about him that just keeps me wanting to know more. I swear if I meet him in real life, I am gonna follow him around till I peel off each one of his layers. That being said he is addictive and I love him and will continue to do so(Even if you turn him into a villain.) Klein is also a intriguing character. He's the kind of guy I would love to keep as my right-hand man.
Your storyline is alluring and addicting. I swear I read it all in one sitting and now I am frustrated with when the next update will be.
Only one critique: try to avoid being repetitive. It changes as you progress, that I can see. And it does nothing to ruin the book. And that's it.
This book is really a work and I gotta say, A dominant like you did a great job.