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Great story

Love the plot. A very unique idea.
I read all the chapters published till now and love the way the story is running.
My next favorite part of this book. Is the character names. The names gives off an ancient vibe.
There are a few Grammer and punctuation mistakes but who doesn't make them.
So far I feel the story is very nice and it completely suits my taste.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Love it

Awesome story. Love it. To tell you the truth, this is the first time I've ever read a fanfic. Stupid, I know. Anyway, I absolutely fell in love with it.. I am still reading it. Keep going author. This book is meant to see a big light

Beautifully written.

The characters in the story has been beautifully portrayed and I love the way you express their emotions. Although, the book is very nice, everything has room for development. I think every sci-fi lover should read it

A TRUE WONDER

This is pure magic. I recommend this book to everyone. Read it people. This book will blow your mind.
I love your writing style. The plot is exceptional and your writing style brings out the best of it. I love the fact that it is a merman instead of a mermaid. I absolutely adore MCs. Their character is very distinct. I can't honestly praise this book enough. It is a masterpiece. I would guarantee buy this book when it gets published. Because a gem like this will definitely get published.

BEAUTIFUL

If it was possible to put more than five stars to a book, I would have given yours more. The language and phrases you use just seeps in through the reader's skin and touches every depth of their souls. Your poetry is is magic and I would recommend to everyone.

MAGIC

Read it!!
This is a must read. I love the plot. It has twists and thrills and will literally make you keep turning the pages and read. And once it's over, this book will make you bite your nails and eagerly wait for the next chapter(kind of like how I am waiting).
The characters are brilliantly designed and the author's writing style is magic. The grammar is good too.

Heart-warming

Goodness me, I think I just understood what falling in love feels like. In simple words, I recommend this book to anyone who wants to feel the warmth, comfort and emotions love can bring. One of the most most heart-touching and unique books I read in years. This really is a master-picture.

Compelling

Let's just say, you have my undivided attention.
The plot is great. It has a shadow of mystery around it which will compel you read further and find out what's going to happen. I am extremely eager to know what will happen later.
It just needs a little editing on its grammar and punctuation but that can be fixed very easily.
Overall, the story is great and I am pretty sure that whoever reads it, won't regret it.

Excellent story line

You are a person with unimaginable creativity. When I started reading the book I couldn't stop. Honestly saying that this book is something I would love to have in my bookshelf. A few Grammer mistakes here and there. That is the only flaw this book have. It's not too severe either. This book has a lot of potential. I feel that one day this book is going to reach excellent hight

Good going

Nice story. Your grammar is quite good but there are a few punctuation mistakes. The plot is nice and is quite educational. I like the names you used in the book

Cool story line

Very good story line. I love the way the story is told. The plot is good too. But there are a lot of plot holes. Nothing you can't fix with a little editing. The grammar is good but there are a few. Punctuation mistakes. You are very talented and your creativity is very bright. The story is very good but even the best stories has room for improvement. The book is going to stay in my reading list because I love it. Good luck author

Good plot

Very good plot. Your writing style is very good but everything has room for improvement. The story is realistic. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Nothing you can't change with a little editing.