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A Good Read

The best part of your book is your characters and I absolutely love them. They are easy to understand and very human, which is one thing that I really love about this book. Mia is a really likable character and connections with other characters in the book are very catchy.
I also like the normalcy of the book. To be honest, its been I while since I read any books with a similar aura. Hence, this book also brings a strange kind of nostalgia.
The writing style is different but nice. It suits well with the characters. I like that book a lot and I would say that it is a good read for any romance lover.

Unique

To discribe this book in one word word would be unique.
I love the characters and their personality. The name Ghost always makes me smile. I think that's my favorite little detail on the story. I also love the amount of discription you gave on the character's personality but left the rest for us to discover.
You grammar is excellent too which really is a great deal.
The only thing I want to say is that I find something missing in the plot. Maybe it's the formation of the the bond between the characters. Or maybe the ending left me a little unsatisfied or unsettled.
Either way, it is a great story.

Love it

Awesome story. Love it. To tell you the truth, this is the first time I've ever read a fanfic. Stupid, I know. Anyway, I absolutely fell in love with it.. I am still reading it. Keep going author. This book is meant to see a big light

Beautifully written.

The characters in the story has been beautifully portrayed and I love the way you express their emotions. Although, the book is very nice, everything has room for development. I think every sci-fi lover should read it

Interesting

The plot itself is very, very interesting and something that I usually gravitate towards when searching for reading material. I love the Kingdom, King, and Queen aspect and usually read them a lot since they always result in an interesting read.
The characters are sound pretty good though I still can't state my feelings about them since only two chapters have been published yet.
Your writing style is good though and the book has high potential. I would strongly suggest editing it. There are a few grammar and punctuation errors that could be corrected by an edit. Your writing could also include a little more description of the emotions of the characters. It's a really good book with a lot of potentials and I can't wait till you update another chapter.

Suspenseful

To say that this story will keep making you want to read further is an understatement. The plot is very gripping and the mysterious aura of this story gives it a kind of haunting feel.
Your writing style is also pretty descriptive which is probably the reason for the story to have such an enigmatic feel. It paints a vivid picture in my paint and makes it easier to understand the elements of the story.
There are a few grammatical errors which aren't a major issue since it can be fixed pretty easily by some editing.
Very interesting story and I am waiting eagerly for the next update.

Interesting

I am intrigued.
Your writing style is pretty impressive. It flows really well and keeps the reader on their toes. It's not too slow and neither is it extremely fast, thereby maintaining a proper balance to keep the reader excited.
The plot is very interesting and I can't wait to read further. I love the thrill this story brings me and I can find myself connecting with Isaiah which I think is the most important part of reading a story. When you connect with a character, you feel their emotions. I am able to feel Isaiah's emotions.
The only thing I would suggest you is to add a little more descriptions about the character, settings, etc.
Overall, it's a very catchy plot and pretty intriguing. I am excited to read further.

Worth Reading

The plot itself is very interesting. I enjoy The perspective of the Protagonist a lot. I also like the environment of the society. Sasha's friends, her goals, and the whole aura of Sasha's world give a sense of normalcy which I love and missed(I am a non-stop fantasy reader at the moment).
The characters are also quite engaging. The way Sasha still isn't over Aiden and Aiden's dislike towards her creating an interesting read. I am very eager to know what Sasha has done. Sasha is quite likable. As for Aiden, he is still an enigma for me. I've read about 3 chapters of Abstract Worth (A very cool and compelling Title, might I add) and I can't figure out how I feel about him. I am very curious to know why Sasha likes him so much.
I like your dialogues the most and the suggestion I have is to work on more descriptive writing. And You could also reduce space between the paragraphs. You could also work on the grammar a bit. A little editing can fix that.
All in all, you are a good writer and I really like this book. Can't wait for more.

Attention Grabbing

Okay, for starters, you are an amazing author with a great talent for writing. Your writing style is attention grabbing and very eye-catching.
Your story is very intense and absolutely engulfing. I really love the emotions it brings me.
The plot brings me a sense of deja-vu cause I used to be obsessed with damaged male protagonists who is later saved by a female. It is a trope which is quote popular and extremely interesting when are written well and I must say you have written it very well.
The female, on the other hand is what I am obsessed with. She is very interesting and I like personality. She also clicks well with they male protagonist.
Overall, you are a talented writer and this book is very well written. I really like it.

HOT

Well, I read it all within an hour and that's saying something isn't it?
To describe this boom in word word would be, it is sexy. This is an erotica and I can promise everyone that this author doesn't disappoint. You give the right amount of detail to keep it burning.
I love the plot, the character and the plot line. Basically, I love the whole book.
The only problem is a few grammar errors bit who doesn't make thek.
Good work author and keep it up.

Addictive

Well, first of all, this is exactly the kind of story I love to read. A mixture of mystery, thought-provoking and intriguing.
I love you writing style. It's distinct and clear. I had absolutely no trouble in painting a picture in my head.
The characters are something out of the ordinary. Especially Xavier. There is something about him that just keeps me wanting to know more. I swear if I meet him in real life, I am gonna follow him around till I peel off each one of his layers. That being said he is addictive and I love him and will continue to do so(Even if you turn him into a villain.) Klein is also a intriguing character. He's the kind of guy I would love to keep as my right-hand man.
Your storyline is alluring and addicting. I swear I read it all in one sitting and now I am frustrated with when the next update will be.
Only one critique: try to avoid being repetitive. It changes as you progress, that I can see. And it does nothing to ruin the book. And that's it.
This book is really a work and I gotta say, A dominant like you did a great job.

Just magical

Love it.
I have always been a lover of this genre. So believe me when I say that I have read quite a few novels in this field. And I would like like to say this is definitely a must read for anyone who likes to feel in extremes while reading.
I love the way you designed the characters. I have connected to them in ways I can't express. The female MC makes is a phenomenon.
Your writing style is good too. It describes an image very clearly so readers have an idea of what you are wanting them to see but it also leaves enough space for readers to create their own imagination. The flow is good too.
You just have a few minor punctuation errors and a little switching of tenses. Though I had the same problem at the beginning of my first book. So it's not something a little editing can't fix.
I honestly recommend this to any reader who likes the romance genre.

Hilarious

I read it at one sitting. That itself shows how addicting this book is. And it is hilarious. I love the names of the quadruplets. Oh and their discription too.
The plot is light hearted and really refreshing.
The characters are amazing. I wish nothing more than having them as friends. They'd be a constant source of entertainment.
The only thing you could do is make the sentences a little smaller or use punctuations to help. If the sentences are too long they can overwhelm the reader.
All in all, I love it and I tell every romance lover to give this a go.

Thrilling

I love the way you described your character. It's very realistic and the way you portrayed her emotions made me feel like I was the one feeling them.
I also love the plot. It's thrilling and extremely captivating. Good call with the cliffhangers too. It leaves you no choice but to keep reading like a possessed man/woman.
I love your writing style to. Your grammar is near perfect. The only criticism I can come up with is your punctuation. Though it's hardly a problem. I recommend every book lover to read this.

A TRUE WONDER

This is pure magic. I recommend this book to everyone. Read it people. This book will blow your mind.
I love your writing style. The plot is exceptional and your writing style brings out the best of it. I love the fact that it is a merman instead of a mermaid. I absolutely adore MCs. Their character is very distinct. I can't honestly praise this book enough. It is a masterpiece. I would guarantee buy this book when it gets published. Because a gem like this will definitely get published.

MAGIC

Read it!!
This is a must read. I love the plot. It has twists and thrills and will literally make you keep turning the pages and read. And once it's over, this book will make you bite your nails and eagerly wait for the next chapter(kind of like how I am waiting).
The characters are brilliantly designed and the author's writing style is magic. The grammar is good too.

Heart-warming

Goodness me, I think I just understood what falling in love feels like. In simple words, I recommend this book to anyone who wants to feel the warmth, comfort and emotions love can bring. One of the most most heart-touching and unique books I read in years. This really is a master-picture.

Compelling

Let's just say, you have my undivided attention.
The plot is great. It has a shadow of mystery around it which will compel you read further and find out what's going to happen. I am extremely eager to know what will happen later.
It just needs a little editing on its grammar and punctuation but that can be fixed very easily.
Overall, the story is great and I am pretty sure that whoever reads it, won't regret it.

Excellent story line

You are a person with unimaginable creativity. When I started reading the book I couldn't stop. Honestly saying that this book is something I would love to have in my bookshelf. A few Grammer mistakes here and there. That is the only flaw this book have. It's not too severe either. This book has a lot of potential. I feel that one day this book is going to reach excellent hight

Good going

Nice story. Your grammar is quite good but there are a few punctuation mistakes. The plot is nice and is quite educational. I like the names you used in the book

Cool story line

Very good story line. I love the way the story is told. The plot is good too. But there are a lot of plot holes. Nothing you can't fix with a little editing. The grammar is good but there are a few. Punctuation mistakes. You are very talented and your creativity is very bright. The story is very good but even the best stories has room for improvement. The book is going to stay in my reading list because I love it. Good luck author

Good plot

Very good plot. Your writing style is very good but everything has room for improvement. The story is realistic. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Nothing you can't change with a little editing.