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Great story

Love the plot. A very unique idea.
I read all the chapters published till now and love the way the story is running.
My next favorite part of this book. Is the character names. The names gives off an ancient vibe.
There are a few Grammer and punctuation mistakes but who doesn't make them.
So far I feel the story is very nice and it completely suits my taste.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Original work

I've been waiting for a long time for a story that has different content. I am very impressed and you have succeeded in catching the interest of a Supernatural creatures lover. I love your plot and the direction this story is going. A way with discription is the main place where you need to try a little harder. Try expressing a little more. Your grammar is quite good. All the best author. The book is a very unique piece. Keep it original

Love it

Awesome story. Love it. To tell you the truth, this is the first time I've ever read a fanfic. Stupid, I know. Anyway, I absolutely fell in love with it.. I am still reading it. Keep going author. This book is meant to see a big light

Very interesting

Lovely start. Your very talented. The plot is great. The way you describe the story is really nice. The change in POV is also very catchy for me. However, there are some grammar and punctuation issues. Nothing too severe. Keep going author and one day this book might see a bigger light. All the best.

Beautifully written.

The characters in the story has been beautifully portrayed and I love the way you express their emotions. Although, the book is very nice, everything has room for development. I think every sci-fi lover should read it

Excellent story line

You are a person with unimaginable creativity. When I started reading the book I couldn't stop. Honestly saying that this book is something I would love to have in my bookshelf. A few Grammer mistakes here and there. That is the only flaw this book have. It's not too severe either. This book has a lot of potential. I feel that one day this book is going to reach excellent hight

Good going

Nice story. Your grammar is quite good but there are a few punctuation mistakes. The plot is nice and is quite educational. I like the names you used in the book

Good plot

Very good plot. Your writing style is very good but everything has room for improvement. The story is realistic. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Nothing you can't change with a little editing.

Cool story line

Very good story line. I love the way the story is told. The plot is good too. But there are a lot of plot holes. Nothing you can't fix with a little editing. The grammar is good but there are a few. Punctuation mistakes. You are very talented and your creativity is very bright. The story is very good but even the best stories has room for improvement. The book is going to stay in my reading list because I love it. Good luck author