Alexis The Kool Kid

Guess who's back :). Anime & Joji are cool. You should read my writing and be my friend. (Obvious edgelord) <3

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Good so far!

There were some grammatical errors. I recommend reviewing your work again before it's published or putting it in an online checker. I'm definetely going to keep reading, I'm excited to see where the plot goes.

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Had more potential

I feel like this kind of story had a lot of potential. There were some grammatical errors, but I think some of them were there because of the way you write. There were no very good descriptions. The story is a bit confusing.

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Awesome!

I love this show, and I think you captured Denki's personality quite well. Very excited to see character development. If you continue writing I will definitely continue reading.

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Very cool!

There were just a few grammatical errors. A lot of poeple don't know how to write this kind of story, but I feel like you did an amazing job.

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Love it

Love that independence! I really couldn't find anything wrong with this, it's a very smooth read, and I couldn't look away (:

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