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Fair enough

I mean, I couldn't see the Ents actually getting on a boat, could you?

(That was a seriously incomprehensible thing in the LotR movies, when Merry makes it plain he totally knows where the Entwives went. I mean, if you didn't know that Merry's cousin saw one, the scene is just baffling. If you DO know that, you're wondering why on earth Merry is keeping it from Treebeard. Agh.)

Anyway. Short, sweet, entirely sensical.

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Just my cuppa

Should note first that you've got at least one missing apostrophe (in the word "singer's") and the story got stuck in italics early in.

Anyway, I adore this take on adult!Harry. And it's partly because he's giving off a total Bearkiller vibe (I didn't stick around for Orlaith but I just want to make sure you know I totally understand and approve of your username here.)

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