StilettoGodmother01

Hello Lovely Inkitt peeps. I love everyone of you guys especially those who support me. You guys mean the world to me because you make me keep on trucking even when I feel horrible.

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It's okay

It's okay but I feel like there's more action going on rather than the development of Jason and vickys realtionship. It's just too slow.

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Very Good!!!

Your writing style is very beautiful. You rarely have any Grammatical errors and your very descriptive but you can oftenly be too descriptive. You don’t want to spend too much time describing because people will get bored and leave your story. Something I learned the hard way. Other than that it’s pretty good!!!!

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🤷‍♀️

Overall it’s pretty good

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