cats and magic, that's what Christmas is all about.
It's a cute Christmas read. I can imagine being it published in an antology of humorous fantasy. For cat lovers and those who like surprising, if somewhat cynical, twists to their tales.
The beginning could be a bit shorter with a tad bit longer ending to flash out the story and the protagonist. Maybe add some more teasing from the pixie or a chase scene through the flat?
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