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Awesome Story!
I think that this story is really interesting. I love the vocaloid it's based on and I find this story an amazing twist. Yes, the characters aren't all in accordance with the vocaloid, but the change in them fits the plot very well. The author has a fantastic writing style, and overall I am intrigued by the story (mostly the plot line).
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