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Oops! I think I'm Inlove💕

I'd be sincere, books I love to read are primarily romance and fantasy. That being said, I think your book has one way or the other changed my whole perspective and I think I'm gonna add drama to my best genre list.
So I loved your book. Your writing style was great though at some point the characters you introduced all at once confused the flow of the story(my understanding of the different characters) . Your plot is exceptional, I've read very few books centred on celebrities and popularity. It makes this book unique. Your grammar is on point, just a very few of some errors it can even go unnoticed. I loved everything about your book even the synopsis.
The paragraph layout. I suggest you leave some spaces in between your writing to make reading it more easier. Reading this book has made me believe you have the potential to reach great heights.
Good Job!
Keep it up! And keep working hard!

Genuinely Captivating!!!!!!

I've had a thing for mafia stories for quite a while now. So anything related to mafia makes my fingers itch for more. That being said, I'd wish you add some romance along the line.
The Mafia queen wants to unravel the secret behind her father's death, it won't hurt to have some fun right?
Honestly, I loved every single aspect of your book. From the plot to the writing style and grammatical structure.
You're one heck of a promising author.
I'm quite disappointed that you've uploaded only five chapters.
Keep it up and work hard!!!
And pls pls pls update soon!!!!

Definitely a good read!!!!

I love your story, how you engage your characters is outstanding. The plot and writing style is on point.
My only problem is with the dialogue, what makes each individual author unique is the act to blend dialogues to make the conversation flow.
Your book has the potential to reach great limits.
Keep it up!!!!

Definitely Intriguing

I loved the storyline.
I like how you engage your characters. Your grammar construction is good, the plot is captivating. You have a way that leave readers yearning for me. Apart from the flow of the story, it will definitely make for a very good read. Keep it up!!!!!

Majestically appealing and Intense!!!!!

Damn damn! I think I need an Ice cream. I eat ice cream whenever I'm super excited or super bored. Seriously! Your book gave me chills all over and at some point I was grinning like a Cheshire cat. As I said in the comments section, you've got a way with words. You know just how to manipulate the words to suit your taste. Your grammar is on point, writing style is perfect, the plot is intriguing and I love how you vividly describe and engage the characters. Mystery lurk around your novel and keeps readers yearning for me. Wow! I'm speechless, wow wow, readers have no Idea what they're missing. Your book is extravagantly constructed. Congratulations! You're on your to success. Keep it up and work hard.

Mindblowing.

I love your writing style, how you engage your characters.
You have a way with words, leaving the reader yearning for more.
Your book will make for a very good read.
Bravo, keep it up.

Cool

Quite an interesting book I must admit. Just few errors here and there but all the same it's lovely.
Keep it up and work hard.

Intense

From my point of view, your book is intense and some ways you try to potray what you imagine into reality but not in a way that will favour the reader.
All the same, I love the book to the moon and back🤩

Intriguing

Seriously I was trembling in anticipation
It felt like I was in the character's position, I felt scared.
It's so disappointing that I'm yearning for more and you've just uploaded one chapter.
You've started your book nicely, and I know there's more to come. I just can't wait.
Pls update soon.

Definitely readable

I was captivated by the prologue.
As I was reading, It got to a point I couldn't put my phone down.
This is a kind of magnificent book that get you hooked till the end.
It's definitely a good read.
Keep it up.

Lovey dovey

Pinch me!!!
I'm still short of words.
I like your book and I would advice you to write more of it.
It has the power to seat tie you until you reach the very end.
Please keep it up, you're on your way to success.

Majestically Intriguing

I've always been into fantasy specifically werewolves and I think this book is the kind to feed you with anticipation as to what to happen next.
It captivates you and leaves you yearning for more.
So far I'm enjoying it to the fullest.