Zara DarkRaven

Fun Read

This story has a wonderful concept and is full of life as was a great view from a Gamering POV.

Perfect Fan-base material for any anime lover looking for something to ship, as you find your favorite character right away.

Definitely a must read.

Beautiful

This short story had me smiling and on the constant verge of wanting to tear up.

Wonderfully detailed and touching.

I would definitely recommend for people to try it if they are looking for a quick read.

Unique Story

I enjoy the storyline of this story and I'm looking forward to seeing more from this writer.

I would recommend adding more details about the scene and characters to give the reader a better idea what the scene they are meant to picture.

All in all, I am really enjoying her character ideas. I look forward to see how they all play out in the end.

Intresting

This is a really interesting story.

I'm curious why those boys where fighting.

Beautiful

This is an enjoyable story that I was sad to see is put on hold.

At most I would suggest trying 'showing not telling; in your story more and editing here and there if possible as in changing the 'i' to capital letters for example.

From the current writing style, it seems to me you are writing with a passion for your characters as you hurry to write while they take over and lead your fingers and you down their rabbit hole.

I hope the fire and inspiration for this story spark again and look forward to seeing the rest of this story soon.

Creative Idea

A very strong start to the story.

Keep it up

Fantasitc read

Very well written. A must for wizarding fans.

I am looking forward to the next chapter:!

Wow

Well written and draws you in.

I hope everything turns out ok in the end :(

Pulls you I

Wonderful wording. The writer sets out the scene without over doing it, making you feel as if you are there experiencing everything!

A great read!

Capturing

Definatley hooked on this story.

Wonderful

I love the writing style of the author.

I'm honestly disappointed that there is only four chapter currently as I'm enjoying it a lot.

The characters are well written and the pacing is set clearly so your attention is captured from the first word.

I had butterflies in my stomach reading about Cove and Bonnie in the garden. Beautiful!

Looking forward to the rest!

Fantastic

I love this Idea of werewolves going to school and being separated into different classes.

Reese seems like such a daddy pleaser and trying to find herself that it's so cute!

I cant wait to see more of this.

Very Emotional read

I couldn't put this down.

Just when you thought you knew where the story was headed, it dragged you into a totally different direction. I was honestly a mix between smiling too hard my face was about to crack to needing tissues as I read this.

The characters make up was fantastic and wonderfully diverse. The situation the Writer chose was a difficult topic but wonderfully handled, including handling people's emotions and not leaving it to the impression that there is only a wrong party who does things because they are bad.

The more you read, the closer you become to the characters until reaching the end I felt I had just finished a journey with a friend I would never see again and that I already miss.

REally wonderful work.

Must Read

The story was written beautifully and well-paced.

I'm enjoying the plot so far which hooks you from the start and was binging on the current chapters. The characters are well-developed and balanced out nicely, especially in their circumstances and you soon decide on your favorites.

I would suggest is try 'show not tell' more when you write. Everyone battles with it at times, myself included.

I look forward to the next chapter.

An African delight

I practically devoured the first chapter in one sitting.

A wonderful concept about the power of faith and the strength of a woman

Defiantly worth the read.

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Wonderful Potential

The writer is still experimenting with her style and finding her feet. At the same time, she took the challenge of writing a tale revolving around an illness that is still some times a sensitive topic, a wonderfully brave move.

Although there are times when it seems to switch between the points of view of who is narrating the story, I have no doubt about the feelings she is trying to put through.

Currently, It promises to lead you anywhere, from a sad romantic tale to something uplifting to a tragedy after chapter one. Personally, I'm hoping the Lead Character gets well again and finds the love of her life.

I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.