Thomas Walker

Milton Keynes

I have strong interests in science, transport, history, politics and music. I write mostly science fiction and fantasy, and my biggest influences are Kevin J. Anderson, Alastair Reynolds & Ben Bova.

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Fascinating world and gripping style

This story creates a really interesting world with a lot of cool concepts. The narrative style, taking the form of a story being told to the reader directly by the character, is very interesting and adds a lot of feeling to the events. The main area I feel needs attention is grammar - whilst the story is written in a first person manner and that excuses some casual use of English, the story does need proofreading for grammar and typing/formatting issues. Overall however this is a very interesting piece of work and I'd like to see it expanded upon more.

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