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Not into "I" books

I normally do not ready books written in first person. They drive me crazy reading them. This author did a great job on this book. I will tell you why, she did not over use the word "I". She used other words also. lol....You think it's funny, but authors write in first person, not knowing how to do it. This author did a great job at it. I like the plot. My publisher will tell you, I like romance books only. No fiction books. My editor writes fiction books and I can't read them. She's only wrote 1 i can read.. I do like vampire books with a love story plot and wolf books.
Great job on this....

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I never give this high of rating.

I never give this high of rating. Most people don't edit their books with a publisher. I can accept a couple of errors in a book., but many is not right. This author edited her book several times, or paid someone to edit it for her. I loved reading it. Great job!!!!!!!!!

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i loved it

Outside of some errors, it is a great read. loved the plot. Most people just write sex stories with no plots. Loved this one. Keep it up!!!

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Great book

I am pretty impressed. Most people write in first person. You didn't. I like that. The book was a joy to read. I'm not finished but I've read enough to make a review. Great job. Keep writing in the third person.

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Good book

I am reading the book and I am enjoying it. Keep writing. I'm enjoying this book. It does need some editing though. But you did a great job

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good book

I enjoyed this book. I have to finish it but it is good. Maybe the only thing I can say to make it better is that it could use some editing. But most of the editing is small things.

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Great job

Very impressive. Great job in creating a world to the readers. Looking forward to some more reading. You edited your book that is great. You could use some help on style, but everyone is different on how they write. This is what makes reading fun. Great job

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Good Book

I read this book and really enjoyed it. Well written but does have some grammar errors, but not bad at all. Great job!!! Looking forward to more.. Just a suggestion getting to know someo of the writing rules can help in the writing process. But all in all great job!!!

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to soon to tell

You only have one page written, but if you make this into a plot, I can see me reading it. Just don't make it all about sex, set a plot with it. You will have a great book then. Continue on....lol

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Great book

I agree with some of the other reviews. You do need some grammar edits done on the book. All in all I liked the book. It took me a minute to figure out your style (written in a play form). Never saw that before, but I like things that are different. My favorite Author of romance books got popular because she wrote in a different style, Danielle Steel. If you ever need help with the edits let me know. My publisher and I help others. My suggestion to you is to learn the rules of writing a novel. Example: Chance your style when writing each paragraph so it keeps the writers attention. Do not use repeated words in a beginning of a sentence in a row.
Great book . Let's see more of your writing on here. Practice makes perfect, I always say.

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needs more

This can be rewritten and get a published offer if you put it in a story line more. Make it out into a book that someone can read. Not have it all containing sex scenes. Try again and let me know when you finish and I will read it. I would love to read it again. Just make a plot with the love scenes.
Also bring a new title, it makes it more enjoyable to read. Good luck, can't wait to read it.

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Hard thing to write about

I don't usually read first person books, but I did like this one. This is a subject that is hard to write about in this today's society. She did a great job of putting it into a plot. The book does need to have implemented on the rules of writing, though. This will give the book more pizzazz. Outside of that she did a great job. She took time in her writing and tried to edit it herself. Just learn the rules of writing and it will be even greater than what it already is. Great job!!!

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Needs more

It is a good manuscript. The only problem is that it needs more detail. Explain the scene better for the reader. What did the room she was locked in look like. Give more feelings into the story also. Some emotions, deep emotions from the woman being raped. Bring out the pot more in the beginning of the book to give the reader a setting more. A good erotic store is not just about the sex. It is about giving the reader a story to follow in their mind. Sex on every page is not good.
I did like the book, though. Needs a little editing, but it is not bad.

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