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You have all the major parts of the story going. The plot is while defined and the style is good. I only found a few grammar errors overall, and it didn't really hurt the overall story. I think in some place you could have used a little more detail, but besides that, I enjoyed the story. I can't wait to see how the story will turn out and how you improve on your characters.

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