Ted1995

I have ADHD and have dreams about becoming a writer.

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A Very Interesting Sory

I like the overall story and the premise around it. But my main complaint is that the chapters are way too short. It needs to more build up to characters rather than plot. But overall, I enjoyed it. Keep up the good.

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A good story, but it lacks a clear plot.

This an interesting start for a good story. The writing style is good and grammar is very iffy at times, but I could still get into it. However what’s missing is a clear cut plot. Not to say that the story is good, it has potential. It’s just that the reader needs to know what the plot if they are to be invested in the story.

Overall it’s a good start. Keep the good work, just make sure that the plot is clear.

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