TeddyRose1191

Georgetown, Guyana

The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense. - Tom Clancy (Check me out on Wattpad https://www.wattpad.com/user/TeddyRose1191)

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Good Job

Enjoyable read. I was able to piece certain aspects together pretty quickly but that didn't take anything away from the story as the one thing i couldn't be certain of until the very end was whether or not Tom was 100% innocent

I loved the way you described your erotic scenes, its where you seem to truly be in your element. Kudos to you.

Some negligible grammatical errors and misplaced words here and there that can be rectified with a quick re-read.

All in all a good story!

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Loving it So Far

3 Chapters in, loving it so far!

Just some grammatical errors to look out for.

Other than that, its good.

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