Temiko

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From someone who’s never read an erotica genre

So I’ve never read an erotica, and I don’t think it’s the genre for me… however this wasn’t so bad! I don’t like the male lead very much especially in the beginning. However, he and Lili has chemistry. That makes the story much more enjoyable. I like their playful banter.

I’d recommend this to people who like quick romance.

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Great Plot

The plot is good. I shared it with a few friends because I found it hilarious and two actually downloaded Inkitt just to read it!
Grammer could use work.

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Sweet Start

I like where this is going. Like I’d said in previous comments, this story has potential. I think the main character can have a really in depth and interesting backstory to how she got her phobia. Phobias can be worked on and improved so it will be interesting if one of the male leads or characters is a past she has to confront in order to get over that phobia.

Great read, I’d recommend to those who love a sweet romance, girl drama, and maybe the normal girl becomes noticed by popular guy trope.

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